|Reviews for Coming Together|
| LaRieNGuBleR 12/7/12 . chapter 11
Nice and heart-warming story :)
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 5
That was such a great scene. So fucking sad! Glad that Reid talked Mikey down.
"They all watched, no one stopped it, no one helped. I begged and pleaded for them to stop it, but they laughed, they all laughed," Mike said turning his gun back to the students. If he were to pull the trigger they could all be dead within minutes. Reid had to get his attention back on him right away.
That is kinda shocking that nobody in that room would shut the video off and that they didn't care that a 16 year old young girl was getting raped crying out for help...and they all laughed. I mean ya this is a cruel world but I can't believe that every single one of them would have been that fucking heartless.
One thing I didn't like is that Reid and Morgan didn't talk to Lizzy, find out whom raped her and then finally arrested the bastard.
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 6
The first thing he thought of when he heard Morgans voice was he hoped that his friend wasn't eating his jello again...that is hilarious.
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 7
that convo with Reid and Morgan about Reid confessing his feelings to Morgan was a good scene. He was so sad that he could have gotten killed without admitting to Morgan his feelings.
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 9
The Garcia spoon feeding Reid part was hilarious. Though I didn't like the doctor part, where she didn't 'appreciate' how the agents were treating her. How she snapped and got angry about him lying about his pain and not wanting drugs. I mean it is his choice. If he doesn't want it there has to be a reason. Maybe he was allergic to it. Or have drug addicts in his family or is a drug addict 'which he it'. She doesn't know...she shouldn't get so angry. I know she is worried for him but snapping at him, a patient, even a stubborn patient is just rude. She should have talked nicer.
And that nurse? What a fucking slut. Wow...glad they left the hospital before she raped him.
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 10
The Jack and Reid and the Reid and dog scene was cute
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy 4/20/12 . chapter 11
I loved your story.
It was sad. I loved that Reid was the one who was held hostage and got hurt, not that I want him hurt or anything...I just love Reid and just started reading CM stories and love Reid centered fan fictions. This story was sad. Especially sad that Mikey died and his family didn't seem to care...what he did was wrong. Though he didn't shoot and kill everyone, the other guy helped. I have a feeling that the other guy killed most of the people. Which I find odd...Mikey seemed to be hesitant and want to stop what they were doing, causing the other shooter to be angry and then Lizzy was shot and everything else. If this was Mikey's revenge, he was the one whom was angry with everyone for watching the girl get raped...why did it seem that he was only Shooter number2? The helper that originally wanted to stop? Then after the other guy got killed, he didn't stop, he continued going, even though his sister Lizzy was dying and in bad shape. Just seems odd to me. He is so angry at nobody helping her when she got raped and she is lying there bleeding to death while he doesn't do anything.
I get that he was scared...but to me it just seems like he should have been shooter number 1. The main shooter, the one who is in charge who doesn't hesitate and change his mind, then change it back at the last second. Makes more sense that way to be honest.
Anyway great story. I like how Reid and Morgan went to the funeral and how he talked to Lizzy, I don't like how you didn't write out the mom talking to them, she left instead because they seemed to need to be alone. I just don't think there was a point for her even going there in the first place if you were not going to write out her apologizing or thanking him...Love how Morgan talked to Lizzy and gave her his card.
I like that it was Rossi's fault and he felt guilty. Weird thing for me to like I know. can't explain it. I just enjoy sad stories...and to me Rossi messing up and saying the wrong name, just makes it more interesting. Rossi feels guilty and is most likely hurting also that it was his mistake, his fault that Reid got shot and could have gotten killed. It was pretty stupid of Rossi to do though, mistake or not.
I liked how Reid talked down Mikey before they could kill him even though the gun was at his head, he had a headache and concussion but also he was shot in his arm and was still strong and did the right thing, got him to lower his weapon. It sucks though because before they barged in Reid nearly had him lowering his gun in the first place. BUT that was an awesome scene. I really loved the whole time in the lecture hall. I was surprised that nobody tried to rat Reid out to save themselves though. Glad they didnt.
| Srienia 1/20/12 . chapter 12
Oh such a nice story, I'm very happy that we were informed what had happened for the unsub though I do wonder why Jim was in on it, but he was probably another tortured soul.
I would have loved to hear about Rachel's reaction to Morgan and Reid, her shift should have ended while they were cuddling and she did promise to come back *wicked grin* I love it when they don't stand a chance.
For the record I would like to express that I'm likeminded regarding seaver and are just begging that she and Reid aren't put together. Way to go by boycotting CBS
Thank you for making a sequel, and for writing this in the first place
| Post U Later 10/11/11 . chapter 11
Lol I Forgot About The 'Reid Affect'. Yay For Clooney Not Being Affected By The 'Reid Affect' XD
| Post U Later 10/11/11 . chapter 10
Omg Jack & Hotch Just Walk In While They're Cuddling In Blissful Sleep. Then The Explanation Why Reid Was In The Hospital Was So Cute. X3
& OMG I LOVE JACK! I Want My Kids To Be just Like Him! XD "Daddy, You Not Mr. Reid!" Lol
Poor Reid... Wait Does The Fact That He's Never Dated Also Mean That He's... He's... A Virgin?
| Post U Later 10/10/11 . chapter 8
"Oh My God, Did That Hurt?" Lol That Made My Day. I Can't Stop Laughing *Wipes Tears Away* Ahh Haha.
Oh That Nurse Better Leave Reid Alone! He's Not Into That... Obviously.
I Kind Of Like Her... But The Real Question Is, Does Reid Like Her. ''Cuz If Garcia Thinks He Likes Her Then He Probably Does. XD
| Post U Later 10/10/11 . chapter 7
OMG Yes! Morgan Is Bi! *Fist Pump*
Call Up The Guiness People NOW! Lol
Aww It's So Sweet How Mogan Care For Him.
They Better Get Together. I'll Be So Mad If They Don't!
BTW What Ep. Is It That Reid Got His Card Back With A Swatch On It. What Ep. Is The One With Austin? I Don't Remember It.
| hot4booth 7/19/11 . chapter 3
It's a good story, but the back and forth times are very annoying. I keep having to go backwards and figure out what's happening in real time.
| Sebby-chan3000 7/4/11 . chapter 11
| Rayne McKenna 3/12/11 . chapter 11
BEAUTIFUL! Wonderful story!