Ok, sooo...I'll be honest, I've actually been somewhat avoiding this fic simply because Shirley is like my most HATED character ever and I care nothing for the Shirley/Lelouch pairing at all and I personally don't think they'd work out anyways, but yeah. I'm still not quite sure how I ended up reading this anyways, BUT.

Enduring all of the Shirley/Lelouch and Shirley/Suzaku scenes were juuuust about worth it when I got to the Lelouch/Suzaku scene X3 Yeah. Teehee X3

I'd also just figure I may as well take the time to say, on a realistic scale, if they were so weird and evasive about sex that's usually a hint saying you're not bloody ready for it. Sheesh. That's no criticism on you, by the way, I know very well this is not reality and in fiction writing you can write whatever you want to write about XD This is me...well, I'd say I'm flaming Shirley, really, because even though she's the one who made the suggestion first to take their relationship to the next level, they never would have gotten there if not for Suzaku, who is infinitely more forward and confident than either of them (in this, at least -shrug-) and you know two timid people kind of just make for a boring, extremely slow relationship :/

Again, my opinion! ...and explanations as to why Lelouch should be with Suzaku! XD He just handles Lulu's spats much better personality wise I just think they're so much better suited to each other and gaahhh I just love them :3

...anyways. Great fic, haha, even (personally) better to me when I mentally crop Shirley out all the scenes and just replace with another Lelouch or Suzaku XD

...again, how DID I get here...? :/ o.O

I don't think Lelouch would ever approve of Suzaku doing it with Shirley, especially if he's the one dating her.

So you see, this is why I dont like giving reviews, I always dont know what to say! I quite enjoyed this one, it was original and interesting, Im not much fan of threesomes but this one was so cute :) Thank you for writing!

So. I've noticed a trend. Of your kinkmeme fills being hot and the fanfiction dot net fics being hotter.

...see, THIS is what I think of when I think of sadistic-Suzaku! Teasing and lording his experience over Lelouch and kind of an ass, but really sweet at heart and overall considerate.

Lelouch was completely overmatched. Shirley is a lucky girl. :p

Do love. Muchly.

LOL i wish lelouch would break up with shirley and hook up with suzaku :3 lurvv this one-shot soo hot!

Only one word needed... AWESOME XD

Hahahaha...this story was great!

I just cant get over the fact that he was staring at the stain on the wall instead of...that!

Yay...a million cookies for you (and a glass of milk)

Pyro13

holy crapoly this was hot. Excellent writing.

That was a really amazing story! All your characters were very much in-character and I could really see everything that was happening. I like how you portrayed Lelouch as a competitive, yet aloof type of person. In short, you got his personality to a T. I loved the awkwardness of it all and how Suzaku was trying to 'help.' It really seemed like that was plausible.

A lot of people tend to make these very grotesque lemon fics, but this one was done with a lot of class. There was an actual plot and there was details. They weren't just mindless animals and such; that was great.

I still can't believe how well written this story is. Everything falls perfectly into place! Even though I'm not a big fan of yoai, this was one that I could read through and actually enjoyed. Really, really, great job!

Signed,

Aquaheart

yea, fluffy LuluShirleySuza ftmfw!

But crap this was long. Hell, this is pretty much a novella. I really should get around to add you on my alerts list.

I think this had to be the sexiest fic I've ever read- and not just because of all of the sex. While there were a few typos, they were pretty easy to ignore because of how in-character everyone in the fic was. I could honestly hear Lelouch, Suzaku, and Shirley's lines in their actual voices and that's a pretty amazing feat for a whole lot of porn. Shirley was spot on and I particularly enjoyed the constant sort of battle going on between Lelouch and Suzaku throughout the story. It made for a conflict that, while obviously irking Lelouch at some points, seemed to make this fic have a lot more spark than it would have had otherwise.

Outside of that, I'd attribute a lot of the fic's charms to the use of comedy that kept it from going on into one of the we're-drones-having-sex fics that a lot of sex-based fanfics are. There was a lot of personality input into everything in this fic and it made it about a thousand times more enjoyable than any porntastic fic I've ever read.

Beyond that, the variation of sexual acts you used kept the pace moving and made certain that the audience got their fill of all three pairings in this fic without feeling like any specific one was overly-favored. (Though I will admit I thought the oral scene at the end was the hottest for some reason... that might have been my personal preference in that case, though). Frequently using Lelouch's thought processes to describe what was going on instead of literal descriptions very much helped to keep the scenes fresh and upbeat as well. It was greatly appreciated.

My only real complaint is that there were a few obvious typos that all just seem to be things that spellcheck wouldn't have really caught (unfortunately, as I was reading for enjoyment instead of looking for mistakes, I didn't record them down so as to help you but there were only three or four, so I don't think it's much to worry about anyway). I wouldn't mind seeing a morning/day-after fic just for the hilarity that I could see ensuing after this whole situation as maybe a sequel, but I wouldn't want to specifically ask for it since that would be greedy after such a great fic to begin with so I'm going to just mention that I wouldn't mind seeing it. Nope, wouldn't mind at all

Overall, it has to be one of the best sexy-time fics I've read so a huge thanks for writing it and making my weekend a little bit better than it would have been otherwise.

So I first off have to apologise for dropping off the face of the Earth ... stupid uni and exams (I'll probably be MIA until the end of this month, just as a warning).

Anyhow, I think this fic was a splendid way to celebrate your 50th fic. And I don't mind that it's porn because your porn always manages to have the right amount of emotion – and in this case – humour.

It was the little moments that really made me love this: Lelouch's embarrassment, Shirley's shy eagerness and Suzaku being playfully coy. I didn't think I'd enjoy this as much as I did (because I'm not all too eager about het in Code Geass, to be honest – because nothing quite seems to rival the chemistry Suzaku and Lelouch have).

But you handled the threesome very well. I like how evident it was that both Suzaku and Shirley were important to Lelouch. I liked that you had Lelouch being very gentle and considerate towards Shirley, but didn't overly romanticise the relationship. I think a lot of other authors would have gone down that track, but in this fic there were hints of his having possibly stronger feelings for Suzaku?

What I'm trying to say is that I liked Lelouch's internal conflict in this fic: he's obviously not admitting some things to himself. Which might potentially lead to some problems ...

And Shirley's eagerness to be with Suzaku was very, very interesting too (and hot as well!). I'm also not quire sure what to make of Suzaku here; he's insisting that he has no ulterior motives, but he still manages to get quite a bit out of this little “tryst”. I strongly get the feeling that the only reasons why he agreed to this was because he wanted to please Lelouch. And him only.

I won't continue my thoughts on this because I'm already developing some crack theories in my head.

So yeah, you don't need to worry about this fic being merely porn – I don't think that's the case. You've got quite a few complex relationship dynamics going on here and leave a lot of room open for speculation.

I think the Suzaku/Shirley smut scene was hot beyond belief. Mostly because you told it from Lelouch's eyes and voyeurism just happens to be one of my top favourite kinks ever. Especially when it's as well written as here. So kudos on that.

I also the liked realism in the Lelouch/Shirley scene. The fact that Lelouch would think that orgasms are taxing is a very IC moment and priceless.

I won't mention the Suzaku/Lelouch scenes. You know that I'm a fangirl for them. I think any further explanation other than that I liked anything between in this fic is more than explanation enough XD.

And, one last bit. I just love the characterisation. Especially Lelouch's. He had many funny lines in this fic, especially the ones where he a) refused to look at Shirley's breasts and b) kept thinking about that stain on the wall. Or where he undressed himself instead of Shirley. Perhaps, another thing: coy and playful Suzaku is just beyond hot.

And I believe Shirley was faking her sleep. I sincerely and solemnly do.

Finally: your prose was really smooth and easy to read in this fic. Though, as always, I'll rest my case and say that I love your metaphors. But sometimes less really is more and this fic wouldn't have worked as well as it did with heavy smilies and a lot of imagery.

Geh, I wonder how my reviews always end up being so long O_o

This was so hot and cute at the same time! I like the extended version! Suzaku is a bit of a slut! "I also like going down on people, on both women and men!" My favourite part is : - Hah, he thought. Mine's a bit longer. But his is a little thicker. Hmm. But hey, longer! - And : - It won't hurt that much because mine's longer - LOL!

It's really quite interesting that I wasn't bored throughout all 12,000 words of this... your easy and concise writing style helps. It looks like your style is getting less convoluted with each update. Liking it.

Ilove all three of your characters. Confident Suzaku, Fail!Lelouch, cute Shirley...3 they were amazing, all three of them.

LOL at Lelouch comparing their penis lengths.

Thx, that story might have made my day. Or week. XD

OMG... Just... OMG! Hooooot!

P.S. I like the extended version more!