(Overall Review) Aaww! How adorable! Pokeshipping with a toddler twist (kinda’ like “Rugrats, Pokemon Style”)! Despite how the Pokemon cast was reduced to toddlers, you kept everyone in perfect character (I loved Misty’s squeaky toy mallet!).

The fic was incredibly well rounded, providing ample humor, melodramatic undertones, and romance. I laughed at all the toddler moments (just when I thought Ash couldn’t *possibly* be any cuter than he already is, your story proved me wrong). Yet, your fic had a few mellower moments, too (I nearly cried when Gary made fun of Ash being fatherless. How mean!). And the romance: Eldershippiness and Pokeshippy hints were well incorporated. Ash and Misty’s “playing boyfriend/girlfriend” was adorable, though it’s a little hard to picture two toddlers in love (but “pretend love” is still sweet). It worked well come the ending, when Ash and Misty eventually wind up in “real” love.

All in all, excellent work! I’ve never read a Pokeshippy fic quite like this one! Absolutely adorable!

this is so adorable!
love it!
and i love the irony (the bike haahahha)
and BROCK is being chased by joy and jenny and he DOESNT like it!
hahaha, that was awesome!
loved the rest of your fics too =D

Aw . . . thats so cute but when Delia and Sam needed privacy it was just nasty. I thought it was sad when Gary taunted wittle Ash about his dad leaving him but of course no one knows for sure what happened to Ash's dad. The only hint was given in the second episode of the whole series but i watched it on youtube only a few weeks ago because when the show came out about 10 years ago i was like 2 or 3 i probably didnt watch it or didnt understand it. Anyways I loved the story!
P.S. So adorable!

hun what what was that!

aw thif fic was so adorable.
i love poke and elder shipping

Brock saying that Jenny and Joy have cooties?!
TOO CUTE!

I liked the part where Brock goes cooties to think in about 8 years he's going to be thinking *verry* diffrintly

The dialogue between baby Ash and Misty was so cute that I felt like I was about to explode. ^__^ Mhmm good!

can u right the next one?!?!?!=)

I wuv dis stowy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really love the baby talk and the characters.It was simply adorable!

I can't wipe the smile off my face!!! This story was so cute and cuddly! Everything about this story was perfect!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ELDERSHIPPING!!!! WEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I loved it I loved it! I love the childlike innosence, and also, it was so funny! And just so damn cute!!!!!

is that the right brock

*takes a big, long breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so adorable!!! I loved it so much!! It was so cute, and fluffy, and kawaii, and sweet, and ummm....... I ran outta words.... but it was one of the greatest fics I've ever read!! I loved it, AAML 4 ever!! Well, I think you're a great author, and I hope to see some more kawaii works from you in the future!! Ja!

~Violet Emeralds~