|Reviews for Charred Light|
| likkle cloud 5/18/13 . chapter 38
Aweeee a little aschXluke... hope theres more of that to come! lol, update soon! :D
| dawn chase 5/17/13 . chapter 38
I can't wait for the next chapter! I feel like its all building up to something really big
| Mizu Hoseki 4/10/13 . chapter 37
it's just so entertaining and interesting to see Sync playing along with the 'heros' of the story instead of being an actual enemy...
a small part of me wished Luke hadn't stopped the two from fighting so soon though, I like a good fight every now and then... but meh if I get that deprived I'll pop in a video game or something.
watching Sync rip Van apart would be an immensely interesting event in and of itself.
Peony and Natalia... still seems a little weird in my book, but meh! on the side note... funny as hell
for some bizarre reason I feel as though I'm contradicting myself in a previous review, but... bah!
keep up the wonderful work!
| Guest 4/7/13 . chapter 37
Liked to see you update again
| dawn chase 4/4/13 . chapter 37
Things are getting heated up!
| Animegirlluver 3/13/13 . chapter 2
Ok a boy marrying a boy is just so...wierd...I was thinking Luke marrying Natalia not Asch.
| Mizu Hoseki 3/7/13 . chapter 36
dun dun DUN!
if Van was aiming for a pissy Sync, well... he got it.
Luke has a good gut for this kinda thing...
-can't wait to see the next chapter!
| Guest 3/7/13 . chapter 36
Sync you better hurry over fast. It doesnt look too good. I love this story. :D So much drama.
| dawn chase 3/7/13 . chapter 36
Well Van better watch his ass
| Kyu-Momo 2/2/13 . chapter 35
Hey, great job! :D
| Lil'MissEya 1/1/13 . chapter 1
Hi! I'm new, and have not alot to say about this chapter. (But that doesn't mean I don't like it.)
Okay, here goes...
Tis is all.
| dawn chase 12/30/12 . chapter 35
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you capture the characters so perfectly!
| Mizu Hoseki 12/29/12 . chapter 35
oh dear, we've got trouble poor Ion and Anise.
Natalia and Peony married? that makes me giggle
oh I can't wait for the next chapter
| guren666 12/29/12 . chapter 35
Oh my ! Finally a story with a proper plot twists along the way. You made my day. :D
| Mizu Hoseki 12/8/12 . chapter 34
I'm sorry the thought of Jade and Natalia getting married to one another is so strange and bizarre that I can't even imagine it...
but a dumbstruck Jade would be an entirely different matter if you ask me - I would love to see something like that for sure
I wonder what Ingobert's response to marrying Natalia and Peony would be, though I imagine that would have solved a lot more problems then Asch and Luke getting married. why not just merge both kingdoms and be done with it, screw the score and all that annoying crap. then go out and bet the snot out of Van
I agree with Sync, the way Jade pulled the rug out from under the guards was very entertaining -