|Reviews for The Cold Mask of Death|
| sketchman64 1/26/13 . chapter 6
i think the story is ok the way it is, but if u must reread it, then i wont stop u. But anyway keep up the great work and good luck with the rewrite.
| AeroShylph 1/6/13 . chapter 6
...well, review it is.
Since I am not a writer (nor a speaker) I sometimes unable to send my message in the most...correct way (seewhatimean).
The last 2ch, which is 4 and 5, were kinda boring. I mean the chapters for me don't really have any highlight and feels rather dragged. Although I consider dropping it half way on 4th I am still interested in the plot and hoping for some improvement. To be blunt, it feels like the whole chapters are going downfall.
As for the characters, it would be better to have one point perspective rather than changing between Toshiro and Minato. And Rukia feels way too quiet.
I'm sorry if I use the wrong term and couldn't get my message across.
Thanks for writing!
| Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 6
Hey, this is an interesting story you have going on here. Let me ask you something. Is this going to be a romance fic? Hopefully not. This story does not need and romance, especially any with Toshiro, because I feel it will be a little to much. The story is great without it.
| 9tail-Naruto 12/27/12 . chapter 6
Slightly upset that I discovered this story now and not at an earlier time at which it was being created, but I'm glad that you may rewrite this story in the future and I shall keep you in my alerts.
Hope you'll write again soon!
| kalakauai 12/21/12 . chapter 3
... so... nothing on Ichigo?
| Crystal Lilac 10/13/12 . chapter 5
AWSOME STORY! Please tell me this isn't discontinued
| sketch 5/7/12 . chapter 5
this is a great fan fic, keep up the good work, i cant wait for the next update.
| Kuso Shroan 4/23/12 . chapter 1
A very good begining - you capture your reader's attention with the first paragraph, which is an important skill to have. And not only that; each sentence is of importance, with a no-nonsense feel to it.
A top notch first chapter.
| The Quiller 1/23/12 . chapter 5
Interesting concept, excellently delivered, and sprinkled with lots of original ideas to keep things fresh. As a fan of both Bleach and Persona, I think you've done justice to both worlds and meshed them in a way that makes a scary amount of sense. Even better, the story doesn't feel forced like so many crossovers do, since you always have a logical explanation behind almost every character motivation or game mechanic.
All in all, I can tell you've put quite a bit of thought into this, because it shows. Great job keeping the characters acting like themselves as well. This story is a ton of fun to read.
Looking forward to your next update enthusiastically!
| Return of the Thief 12/1/11 . chapter 5
This is a very good story, it's inspired me to write a crossover as well. Thank you very much for gracing P4/Bleach fans with such a great fic.
| Cheezeburger 11/28/11 . chapter 5
I like it. I've never played the game,but I've Read bleach. I liked how you recaped without making it seem out of place for any new readers, and I feel caught up with whats going on. Nice job! :3
| ShadowDragoon32 11/28/11 . chapter 5
Yo! Great chapter as usual, man, it was great to enjoy. The middle section with Junpei followed the original P3 stuff pretty closely, although I'm a little surprised that you didn't include Mitsuru's speech.
Anyway, this was an all-around fun read, and I hope you can update sooner next time. Or not, no pressure, haha.
Dragoon (it feels good to write that again 3)
P.S. I noticed on your summary that you spelled 'infiltrate' wrong. Might want to check that out XD
| Writing bunny 11/28/11 . chapter 5
Good chapter. It was funny. especially the stuff with the gikongan.
| Cstan 11/28/11 . chapter 5
Nice to see that this story is still being continued. That was a shocking bit when "Hitsugaya" didn't realise that he was the mod-soul. I hope he remembers to tell this to Rukia so that she is prepared.
Aaand enter Kisuke Urahara. Seriously, that guy can't stay out of trouble, can he? Hehe, soon it's going to be a full moon and then our resident shinigami will meet their first HUGE shadow and witness the power of the wild card, Minato Arisato.
On a different note: I can't wait how Aigis is going to interact with the two shinigami. I can only imagine how curious Kurotsuchi will be about her existance.
See you next chapter.
| Omega the Omniscient 11/27/11 . chapter 5
Aha! Finished it. Very interesting with the mod-soul. I wonder, is it like an artificial intelligence? Or is it not really sentient? I just like to ramble on withmusings and whatnot occasionally. I enjoyed it. Looking forward to more.