gyah they are killin' me. so bella's got a story...and a big one. how will he draw it out of her?

i'm a south alabama girl and i love this florida beach town. and holy moly, who knew that little bit of flirting could be so hot? he DOES have skills!

hmmm, just like there may be two sides to bella, there certainly are two sides to edward as well.

just found this via twitter rec today and it's great so far. i love the details you give us in the landscape and the surroundings. can't wait to keep reading more.

Loved it, though im im really sad for Bella and I hope that they both can help each other out and i have a question will see ever read the email he left her? i was just wondering i know it just happend in last chapter he was just so tore up i wanted to know how she will react .. ok thats it and again i loved it :D

Darn, thought we'd finally get some answers this chap! Oh well, now I can't wait for next week :)

I am so glad that she is finally talking to Edward. I am so curious now, can't wait for next Friday's update.

Well, that was abrupt! Can't wait to hear the rest.

I think you know I am really into this story. I am. But I think I could read you writing about paint drying. The way you reveal bits and pieces and the way you describe their reactions to each other and way you can feel the atmosphere or smell the salt in the air. I feel like I am there.

Of course, I am freaking out that Bella is a murderer or thinks she is and has no plans to tell Edward that. So something else horrible happened that she isn't to blame for. She empathizes with poor Emmett. Edward and his anger FOR her and not AT her was so swoon worthy. Bella's actions after her dad died. I LOVED, LOVED their reactions after seeing each other. And I didn't even mention that you left it there!

well, she's finally coming out of her proverbial shell...

Just wanted to drop you a comment. I am fail and this is really the only story I bother to do so anymore. I'm sorry. I'll try and be better at it. Even though comment #s are low, hopefully your reader/alerter numbers are high! This is a really good story.

I re-read this on Lj the other day - I am the most impatient reader ever.

Have fun at the beach!

I am so very glad she is going to open up to him, that she is going to confide in him. It sounds like Rose died and Bella was somehow involved. Poor Bella. Whatever happened sounds heartbreaking. I am so curious to find out! I loved their embrace when Edward returned. That she feels like home to him. And that he wanted to kiss her. I hope she reads the emails. Wonderful chapter primarycolors and looking very forward to the next update! Have a great day at the beach! :)

Jodi

Really awesome story! Update ASAP! ;D

Good that Bella has decided to tell Edward her story- or at least part of it.