This is a great story

I cannot for the life of me understand how this doesn't have a hundred thousand reviews and as many faves. It's awesomesauce *clapclapclap*

FUCK YOU THIS IS OFFENSIVE TO AMERICANS, YOU IDIOT! DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT 'CHASING PAVEMENTS' MEANS? IT IS OFFESIVE TO AMERICANS! DELETE THIS STORY NOW! I'VE ALREADY REPORTED IT 27 TIMES, DON'T MAKE ME DO IT AGAIN!

YOUR PROBABLY A TERRORIST! SUCK MY COCK, BITCH!

I like

Awww. This is rather sweet. I found Sadie IC. :) I like the way you wrote Emma too. She seemed very sweet and nice. Janie reminded me of so many girls I know...

I think the best thing about this is that I can relate to it. I've been in Sadie's friendless position before. And it's hell.

So kudos to you for writing this. I usually don't like Sadie much, but this...wow. I love this. :)

Keep writing!

Different

Wow. Sadie's character was just...wow. I had a fondness for Sadie but I never actually imagined her being THAT bad. That said, I think you portrayed her really well. It shows the angst she's going through. I like the effort Gran puts in. But Sadie just needs a discipline check, really.

But that was well-written. I enjoyed reading it very much :)

I THINK I HATE IT!

Sweet! Good job

Cute, well-written, and little to no grammar mistakes!

Exellent work! Keep it up!

wow. i mean, i never liked sadie, but during this, she was such a JERK, even more than usual! if i was gran, she would have been grounded for life! in other words...I LOVED IT! and i'm so happy you've written another kane chronicles story! FINALLY! GREAT JOB! and i love gran's character! pure genius! keep it up!

-mythomagic (aka greenplanet)

p.s. recycle please! save our planet!

I loved it! Nice job :)

And I don't think Sadie was ooc...