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afrozenheart412 1/26/11 . chapter 1
I agree that Danny is sweet, but he is still EVIL in tricking Lucy into telling on herself, LMAO! This was a perfect way to try and get back into the swing of things! Lucy is adorable in here, I just want to eat her up! As for Lindsay, my heart when out to her with her wanting to tell Danny this time in a romantic and special way.

Totally awesome, my friend! :) I just hope that after this that Lindsay made him sleep on the couch, his fun time is over, LOL!
Broe929 1/24/11 . chapter 1
This story is wonderful! I'm actually a fan of most of your stories so this comes as no surprise as being great. I could see Danny tricking Lucy into spilling the beans. I really enjoyed this thanks for sharing!
LoveIsInTheAir4DL 1/22/11 . chapter 1
So lovely... How cute... I love it!
MesserFamilyFan100 1/22/11 . chapter 1
That was so cute
dannymesserforever11 1/22/11 . chapter 1
That was a great story, I absolutley LOVED it! Great concept, and Great job! ))
Dine89 1/22/11 . chapter 1
Just so you know, when I wake up in the morning I'm always looking forward to your updates. And then you come up with such a wonderful, sweet and funny oneshot. You definitely know how to make my day and how to make me smile :) So, thanks a lot for that! I really mean it!

I totally love fics with Lindsay being pregnant. And the fact that Lucy is also mentioned a lot is even better. She's so adorable and such a cutie. At first I really thought Lucy would keep the secret for herself and lets Danny stand in the dark. This would've been awesome and hilarious. Danny's face would be priceless. I mean she promised her mom she would stay quiet and girls always have to stick together, you know? But we all should know better; a young innocent little girl can't keep a secret for too long, especially when Danny frames her. LOL

OMG! Danny is like a little child and soooo sneaky. It's too funny how impatient he is, he just can't wait. So he tricks his poor, little baby girl to find out about hers and Lindsay's secret. Danny should be ashamed of himself, tricking his daughter like that... LOL. And of course Lucy can't resist Danny. She's so excited when she hears they're going to suprise her mommy, how can she say no to Danny's request? “Fine. My secret is that I want to surprise Mommy. She's a great Mommy, isn't she?” When Lucy nodded eagerly, he smiled and added, “See? So I want to buy her something really nice and as you're a girl as well, maybe we could pick something together.” - “Oh yay!”... “I wanna help you, Daddy!” - “Great.” ... “See, now you know my secret. And what's yours?” - “Mommy said I'm going to have a sibling,” ... “But shh, no one's allowed to know.” This is just too adorable, you can see howm uch Lucy loves her parents. :D

I love how Danny plays the innocent and unknowing husband. But he should know that he can't pull the wool over Lindsay's eyes. “You know it, don't you?” - “I know what?” - “You tricked your daughter into telling you her little secret, right?” - “I don't know what you're talking about.” - “Oh, come on! You know that I'm pregnant again, right?” - “Are you?” ... “Yeah, I do know that. And I wonder why my wife didn't tell me about that although she knows how much I want a second baby.” LOL. You gotta love Danny, you can't even be mad at him for tricking his innocent daughter. He's just so excited about the baby, it's so adorable.

Another awesome family oneshot, so please more, more, more!
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