Interesting. I liked it.

I think this is a great moment. You pack a lot into this one chapter, Max's dirty past, Logan's mum, recent events w/Jonas. Well done. I did like the picture you painted of Logan's mum. In this fic I think she qualifies as an original character, almost. Thanks for writing it.

Exquisite, as usual. And of course, there's the darkness. Thanks for reminding us that there's more than one dark angel at work here. I always enjoy your work. Short, sweet, and to the point.

And it's always good to hear more about Logan's mother, even if we don't know much about her, other than the fact that she is the moral core o his life.

Please write more, and soon. BTW, I had already read your work before Willow recommended it, but I had missed this one.

I have to agree with a fan. Very poetic and in character. Wonderful reading in general, not just DA.

I have just discovered your writing. I must say I'm impressed. Lovely poetic language. You must write more much more.

I've always pictured Logan's mother as being someone who tried to teach him that money and power didn't count for much, that it was the essential goodness of people that counted. Her quote that "the universe is reight on schedule" fits with the way you have chosen to portray her I think, as a person having faith and optimism that things will work out in the end.

Very nice story.

Really like this. :)

'I will remember their sins no more.' What a wonderful description of exactly what Logan decided to do at the end of I and I am a Camera.

Your description of Logan's struggle with darkness was very powerful. You showed us his frustration at the injustice at the prosperity that Jonas achieved by 'diving into the abyss' and his deep understanding of Max's struggle to stay a step ahead of it and his own struggle 'Clinging desperately to fragments of truth and love and hope, while the inhabitants of the pit had wrapped themselves around his lower half and were still pulling, beckoning, coaxing him to let go.'I love your language it is very poetic. This sentence was just one example.

I agree that Logan's battle with the darkness was just as intense and hard fought as Max's. He truly had peered over the edge. Having gone through it himself he could set Max's past behind him and 'remember her sins no more'.

Once again I really appreciated your scriptural references in this story and your use of Logan's mother to introduce them.

I should let you know I'm another one of those Willow referrals. I have found your work to be very insightful. In each of your stories you have managed to capture some of the most fascinating themes introduced in season 1. Beautiful work all around.

Willow seems to be the one sending everyone here :-)

I was looking for a nice M/L fic before going to sleep and this was exactly what I needed.

Fics where we get inside the heads of Max and Logan are my favorite and it's so good how he understands the meaning of "remember your sins no more" here.

Thinks I'm gonna sleep well.

I really like your portrayal of Logan's mother here, and the way you connect "I will remember your sins no more" and her explanation of it with Max's background. I *don't* like the way you hvae Logan thinking about Christianity, but that's because I'm a believer and I like to think of him as one too. My own preference, I guess. At any rate, this was well-written and I look forward to reading more from you.

Well now... How could I have missed these great stories(all your stories) until now, I ask you??? WOW highly enjoyable...Thanks to a mutual friend of ours, Willow for indirectly sending me here.... Loved it!

wow. i'm impressed. this was really well written... and the way you described logan's mother seemed to fit perfectly. looking forward to reading more from you. :)

This is very nice. I like the reflection, the quote is great, and lol on Seattle personal raincloud (so true).

I really liked this - everything tied together: flow, imagery, theme. That comment about darkness is so central to the episodes at this stage of season 1 and so pivitol to the characters. You really did it justice. Hope to read more of your writing.