 twice the rogue 12/19/05 . chapter 1Yeah i love that charactor is written from your point of veiw isn't it perhaps you should mention that in the summary. |
 x.Irish.o.Eyes.x 7/10/03 . chapter 1Nice was original and effort was shown. A pair o' thumbs up from me! lol. The one thing that you could improve on a little bit is your spelling. I just noticed a few minor errors throughout the ,just fix those up,and it'll be ,I hope to read more of your fics. C ya! |
 A helpful friend 3/29/03 . chapter 1 Not bad, but if you want to be a serious writer you need to learn to spell. Assured has two s's. Fateful only has one l. |
 Humour me 5/11/02 . chapter 1This is such a really good poem! Jonathan is mine, though, cause I have liked
John Hannah and his characters for 8 whole months and still like him today!
Really good poem, really seet. |
 skidlebop 5/5/02 . chapter 1 John is mine! you cant have him! I know I'm late on reviews, but I'm going back through old fics, gosh is he hot... |
 jonnycarnahan 4/19/02 . chapter 1 I love it! Wish he were real sometimes! |
 Hel Frost 3/27/02 . chapter 1 It was pretty good. Sort of intersting, but strange. We liked the part about Jonathan's smile. He's always been the most amusing character. We're glad some people are willing to write about him. Keep up the good work! |
 Lady Sen 3/20/02 . chapter 1I love it, it's really cute. Forgive me if I don't go on and on, I have been typing all day and my poor little fingers are tired. But I really want you to know I like it, there are not a lot of Jonathan fic's out there period. And he is sooo cute! Kelest |
 Evelyn OConnell 3/20/02 . chapter 1 SWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTT! Hey that was a really good poem! |
 marrokinhas 3/20/02 . chapter 1I do believe you melted his heart. |
 Nefratiri 3/19/02 . chapter 1Not Bad. Not Bad at all. |