So much love

Gosh, this is so refreshing. Your descriptive prose is lovely and perfectly succinct without being too wordy. I also enjoyed the interaction between those two. Loved this!

very sweet story :3

My, I wish was at a river right now myself! The details were lovely, and the race was well described too. Malik and Altair's interaction is too sweet, though I was rather hopeful that Malik would play a trick.

Peace out boy scout,

Gord and V