you have got to finsh this OUTSTANDING the best story are like magic they cast a spell on you from the first page onwards and you have please finsh this story

This was a very well done story. It is too bad that you abaondoned the sequel, as I would have liked to have read that as well.

I don't think that there is major editing required, it is just fine the way it is. Wonderful story and I can't wait to read more. GOOD JOB!

*Snickers fill the halflit living room* O THAT was GOOD!

well but solaris [is that her name?] isn't going to like what the priests are doing so it's even.

ooh the suspense! it kills me!

oh yay.

gwena talks to darkwind? it's against the rules! only unchosen companions talk. and that's in special circumstances. *sigh pretty horsey with wings...-

still uneasy with the secret keeping. you know it's going to explode later. at the worst times possible.

haha. because companions speak japanese eh? and ooh i knew that would happen! yay!

beautiful and cute. hehe. but it makes me uneasy, companions keeping secrets from each other.

beautiful.

this is a great story. i can't wiat to read the rest.

This is wonderful. I don't know how to describe what I felt as Seraphim went after her Chosen.

My oh my, breaking off now? Aw...too bad!

Rating: 10/10!