hahahaha dope

*laughs so hard, has to gasp for air*

You just MIGHT have had a bit too much time on your hands when ya wrote this. Lol though! Quite funny.

hahaha o shit that was funny

Yeah... Rock on, good fellow. That was just too freakin' awesome. You get two double-jointed thumbs up from me!

um... sure... and... then... (maybe if I could read musicly, this would be funner...)
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Have a great day!

_ Nya ha ha! fits great to the beats.

Heh, i'd like to see someone make a recording of this being sung.

That didn't really rhyme It would have been funnier if it did. I didn't even read the whole thing. The lack of rhyming got boring started off okay.

O.O ... *stands up and begins to clap* Encore Encore... that was funny as hell... where did u come up with that idea ..that is so cool... all i can say is "Wow"

*shrug* never liked Songfics. As good as any of them I suppose.

I liked it. I really did-but to be honest this isn't a 'songfic' its more or less a 'filksong' more than anything else...to make it into a songfic you'd have to add some background to the song itself, such as perhaps Ranma belting it out as part of a contest or something...perhaps

L-sama singing it as he checks over to _Insertion_ or _Gaijin_ or something...anyway I liked it and will keep checking back for whatever craziness you can come up with next!

for your first songfic it was good. keep up the great work.

Nice work. You're right, that was funny.

This is good.

But Damn. I am kinda torn between telling you to stop writing new projects and get back to finishing the stuff you got on the backburner like liquid fighter, Saiyan Tail, Dragon and the Ghost, Xero, and so many others. And yet your new stuff always kicks ass.