Aw, this was cute. :) I love it!

I really liked this is was very cute Oh and it put me in a very smiley mood so even when I went to read some FMA (which happens to be at a very depressing part I was still smiling like an idiot.

see ya

Megami-Kitsune

I found this again! I thought I this was already in my favorites and I'd have reviewed this already, but apparently not! D:

Alright, so - this is THE best Cilan/Ash fic I've read! It's really cute, without being cheesy, lame or just full of sugar like most of the "cute" stories, and I adore they way you wrote the characters (even Pikachu, he was awesome in this!) and the situation. This isn't the longest fic, but it took my so much time, since I had to, from time to time, just stop reading it, because my heart beat too fast and I was getting over-excited. And that's a good sign when reading the fic, it tells that I'm really enjoying it!

Ash and Cilan...they way you made them - perfection. Absolute perfection. Ash was so adorable, blushing and being embarrased and Cilan was just...I don't know the right word, but he was so sweet. And I liked the fact that he bluntly confessed his feelings to Ash without making a big scene about it. It fit perfectly to this story. And I kinda like the fact that you didn't Ash actually say out loud he liked Cilan too but found other ways to show it (seriously, the "I love you" usually kills the fic for me).

So, this fic is absolute win! You're so talented! :D

I really like this! I "aww'ed" at the cuteness of this

Gah! I'm so happy, this has got to be one of the best cafe mocha shipping stories I've ever read! Please tell you'll continue, for my sake! I would love to read another story about these two growing closer from you! It would an absolutely wonderful experience! I love the way you wrote Cilan, it was perfect, my heart was beating so fast I could practically hear it in my ears! 3 Please write more! I'll be waiting!

I am such a fan of this pairing. The first time I saw Cilan I loved him, and then later watching him interact with Ash was adorable. And since Ash is my favorite forever, this pairing is perfect! C: Sorry, Gary.

Cute fic!

It's a strange coincidence that I made a story about Cilan is Ash's penpal before reading this story (though the penpal thing takes place before Ash even starts his journey...) Anyway, this is a really cute story. I was a little surprised by the girls' sudden encouragement, but that made the mood lighter...and stuff.

Ahaha, I don't know what else to say really other than you did a good job with this fic. :) It made me rethink of what I planned for my own CafeMocha story (I'll probably have to fix some ends to make it sound more sense or something.)

Adorable fic, I loved it!

W Im' all happy now. :D

oh my god this was asome i love it ash and dent are the cutest ever!

I don't know why, but the pairing of Dent and Ash is seriously looking...um...HOT to me. *ducks away from rabid other/Ash fans* Don't get me wrong! I'm still an avid Gary/Ash fan...it was what got me started after all! But seriously, when I watch the anime I can see *being delusional* the sparks between these two! I feel bad, but the urge to stab Iris sometimes is pretty strong. Lol.

This fic just gave me good goosebumps y'know? Haha! D Dent was being a gentleman by so-called stopping his interactions with Ash...but he didn't count on Ash storming back into Sanyou Gym to get some answers. LOL. And what was sweet was that Dent confessed and didn't need to hear the answer from Ash 'cause he knows its mutual! And Pikachu! *huggles Pikachu* Hehe.

Cute fic! Long live Dent/Ash! *adds pairing into her very long list of ***/Ash pairings*

This was the best thing ever.

This was really quite lovely. I haven't yet seen the episodes of the new season, but I'd been following the new character announcements on certain fan sites, and well, I kind of already became a fan of Dent/Ash.

Your language use in this story is incredible. It has such a mellow vibe to it, but with yearning in all the right places that tugs at the reader's heartstrings. I was right there with the girls when they said "Go Dent!" I wanted this to work out, definitely.

A lovely read, and one of the best fics I've read recently. :)

wow!

I love CafeMochaShip!

Keep writing, bro!

Ehehe. This is so cute. c: I love Dent n_n They'd look like a lovely couple (: