Lovely characterization :)

This was great, very well written and I like how you seemed to catch their emotions really well too.

This was AMAZING! You captured the emotions very well.

*fangirl squeal*
Oh, this was lovely! Great angst and fluffiness. :D

That was angsty and yet had an overall calm to it that just made it flow and it was quite -whats the word-resolving?
The idea of Tohma letting go and all of Toham's interactions are great-just grin-tastic! But the kind of confession between Shu & Yuki was also played well.

erm...there's no MAYBE about Shuichi's rape. Aizawa and two hired thugs raped Shuichi and took pics of it to blackmail Shuichi with. But great story!! and you're right, no one talks about that parallel between Yuki and Shuichi. Although, they did both handle their rapes differently...*wink*

~Loard Monica

Unbelievable sweet...I'm glad I decided to peek into the older Gravi fics...^_^

Wow, that was a wonderful Gravitation Fic! I can't wait to see what else you do with these two. ^^

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

Aw... sad but extremlly cute! ^__^

That was great! I so totally loved it!! *smiles I'll be looking foward to some more of your work!!