|Reviews for The Voice Of Reason|
| Amarenima Redwood 2/6/13 . chapter 25
This is a great story and I hope you get back to it soon. Thank you!
| David boreanaz's wife247 1/16/13 . chapter 24
| Ice Roza 12/30/12 . chapter 23
Thank you soo much! I can't believe that this is almost done, it's almost bittersweet . I can't wait to see how this ends. I don't think I've e we read a story where Severus is this caring over all I really love this story
| David boreanaz's wife247 12/30/12 . chapter 23
really cool chapter
| David boreanaz's wife247 12/23/12 . chapter 22
busted ha ha love it very sweet
| Ice Roza 12/22/12 . chapter 22
Charlie? what happened to Charlie?
| Lordhightoppfan 12/21/12 . chapter 22
| yes I am still Alive 2/26/12 . chapter 21
For starters: yay they said "I love you" to each other. Big step in a relationship.
But the conversation and interaction seemed forced. The whole chapter just seemed rushed and spit out, to be honest. That's not to say it wasn't good; on the contrary, you have quite the way with words.
Did Charlie make it out, or did he parish in the rubble? It would be a nice thought to have him run away into the forbidden forest and live wild, if he could have made it out of the dungeons.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with school!
| David boreanaz's wife247 2/25/12 . chapter 21
this is great work
| You know it's me 2/1/12 . chapter 20
It's official: I'm a lurker. I would much rather read a chapter and then keep my thoughts to myself, because no matter what I put down, I couldn't do justice to what I'm actually thinking in my brain. I don't even want to bother logging in. Gosh.
Hermione calls Ron "Ronald" far too often. I have a feeling that you think the given names are just catchier and more proper, or more fun or whatever, which I agree with, but Hermione didn't call him his full name all the time, which is something she seems to be doing.
Also, the romance came about pretty suddenly in these few chapters, but that could just be because you haven't updated in so long and I've forgotten the tension you've built up.
Snape is too friendly. He's not the brooding, antisocial jerk I imagine him being. He's too civil with Hermione, regardless of feelings of affection.
Okay and now for the things you actually care about: I love the way you have turned the story. This new direction is interesting and I cannot wait to see where it leads. Ron under the imperious, and Hermione the next target, not to mention the disappearance of the entire Griffindor house (and what was up with Hermione's bed being the only one untouched?)
Update soon, darling. You are on a roll.
| Lordhightoppfan 1/31/12 . chapter 19
Great story! Can't wait to read lemons! Please update soon such a great story!
| David boreanaz's wife247 1/30/12 . chapter 19
| CKFanGirl790 1/29/12 . chapter 19
I wonder what happened to the Gryffindor students?Please post more soon!;)
| David boreanaz's wife247 1/26/12 . chapter 18
| lionessforseverus 1/25/12 . chapter 18
Wow! What a cliff hanger but a good chapter - looking forward to the next update so we can hopefully find out what's happened!