Hawkeye! :( I hope he doesn't get hurt! Dang, a woman definitely knows what she wants.

wow so much character and plot development here. Well done my friend! please please update this one soon

Wonderful interaction between Father and Margaret. It was great that you added that in and we saw Margaret's softer side as well as Father M. trying to find some way of condolence.
The plot thickens some more! lol :) Very shocking about what Margaret's father did, I'd never imagine it!

Cannot wait to see the dirt on Floyd! Hope karma will get him soon, and I hope Colonel Potter can give it to him!

The Queen of Cliff Hangers returns! :P I'm thinking the people in the shadows are Hawk and Klinger? I could be right, right? :) I still can't believe Charles being so helpful, especially to the "Swamp rats" but I gotta admit he's doing a great job! Him and BJ can actually get along, something you don't see everyday.
Know what's sad? I can picture Klinger tied up too! LOL!

you cant leave it there! Update soon!

! That is my reaction to both chapters. Poor Father to witness such crime!
I should say thought that suicide isn't really a crime against God, unless you're just putting it in his point of view, plus by today's standards the Catholic Church has deemed that it is not a sin because people are in their right minds. Just a bit of info for you! :)

awesome! so glad you're inspired to continue this story...it rocks!

Love how we finally see Margaret in all of this! I feel her frustration, and her pain. :( I hope that murderer is seen soon and let our Head Nurse out and free!
The prayer at the end is a very good touch. :) 3

I'm still in shock over Charles' assistance in all of this. It's more like the Charles towards the end of the series. :) I love it! He made it so him with all his forgery and yet he shows he has a soul.
I do feel a little bad for Claus, but I seriously don't trust him at the same time. Great job with that. Emily, you know how to leave at a cliff hanger, I'm dying over here to know what's going on! :D

What a lovely Sherlock reference . . . I knew it was coming. Alright I like the pace of the story. Not too slow or too fast.

Alright so someone is going to extreme lengths to frame Margaret. But who? and for what purpose? Revenge? Or just to cover their own trail? . . . . things are beginning to heat up.

this is awesome! I can't wait for more, I can't stress enough how much I love this story!

I see why Igor vomited . . .when Klinger was describing Curtis' head and body, I even feel a sick feeling. So kudos for getting my senses involved. And holy sh't, who or what did that to her body!? Its was completely mangled and mutilated. . . . man this is good.

I am so impressed with your depiction and dialogue of the characters. Everyone is so in-character and I am really impressed with your talent. Especially Hawkeye's silly language and Potter's hilarious mannerisms. And I am really enjoying the format and layout of the story.

And about the disappearance of Nurse Curtis . . . I can just tell you'll have us guessing until the very end of the story. ;)