 Grimm2 9/15/11 . chapter 1ohmahgosh, I got so embarrassed for England that I couldn't finish...I just scanned the last couple lines and couldn't make myself go on when I read 'lamas'...btw I love a semeJapan with ukeEngland XD. It's (sadly) not too common. |
 Tiamat851v5n 5/26/11 . chapter 1...i feel very bad for england... |
 TheCorty 5/9/11 . chapter 1Aw, poor Japan and England XDD |
 TangerineTea 4/1/11 . chapter 1Mein gott Japan, you are effin' off your nut. XDD I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON. BUT I THINK I LIKE IT. |
 subaru1999 2/20/11 . chapter 1great oneshot! ive never heard this song b4 but after listing to it (and falling in love with it) the story really comes alive. poor japan, and i cant wait to see what you will write next! |
 Saint-Valentino 2/13/11 . chapter 1I actually think this is quite adorable C: Japan's very sweet and it's actually quite IC to be falling in love with England, being a noob at love and all.
I do have to say that there was a time-lapse in your story that you didn't indicate. All of a sudden I found myself reading something in an entirely different timeline and it was pretty confusing. You should add a pagebreak in there :) |
 Oliver Jasmine 1/27/11 . chapter 1Wierd but undeniably funny.
Japan's fully out of character but that only makes this more over the top. |