Nice story

"Story Rating: PG-13 (there’s some teeny weeny swearing in it, but hey, it’s not like there’s any kid under the age of ten out there who hasn’t heard them all)"

I belive that.. now adays its around the age of eight, however there are a few acceptions, I first heard the word 'crap' when I was 16... and that was only where I worked *I live a way to sheltered life*.

Anyway, back to the point, Nice story, keep up the good work.

sob you made me sob

there!you did it again...are you, like, only an angst writer?i mean, even though the endings of your stories are happy, they're all REALLY angsty, sob...i gtg wash me face...sob

wow. thats all i can say. wow. i said it again.

omygosh! I'm like CRYING! I loved it!

I'll say it again: you are the best author here and most likely on the entire web. This is now my third favourite fan-fic. (Next to your other two.)

Awwwww...You have no right to make me kinda like Beka like that! I'm supposed to hate her guts. But awwwwww...

AWW1 That was sad but, sweet.

*wipes eys* *sniff* Awesome!

Nice story, I was racing to get to the end, and you nearly had me convinced that she was going to take him back:) He really needed some hugs in that story.

Wow! Such a great fic! Even though I was yelling Bad Beka! half of the way through and hoping she wouldn't actually leave him...that would have been awful...but I'm so glad it ended the way it did...you have a great ending line! Keep writing!

Jen

*applause* I wuv it!

wow that was a great story

WOW! That was freakin' brilliant, if you can't tell, I loved it! :D Very big well done!

This was amazing Raven! No story has ever had me in tears before but I was bawling my eyes out at the end of this! Write more-you have definite talent ;)