I love how you kept the description as narration. I could, quite literally, hear the story being told in the narrator's voice from the movie. It made potentially boring description interesting and easy to read.

I LOVED this! I was trying to find something to help me get my fill of Stardust (YouTube was just NOT cutting it) & low and behold, I found your 'fic by googling it. I'm so grateful you wrote this. Thank you, thank you.

That...was...perfect. It was well planned, long enough to be interesting but not annoying, it had a little mystery (what with the stars knowing and all), and it was fluffy. Perfect! :)

So cute! So sweet! Loved this!

too cute. great story!

Yes, perfect. -

How wonderful! Your sweet story is simply too good. I think you captured the innocence of Tristan's and Yvaine's romance perfectly. The narration of this fanfic matched the tone of the movie well. Congratulations, this was exactly what I was looking for after just finishing the movie: A bit of insight on what the characters might have really be thinking through it all.

PS (Pleasantly Surprised)

I love this story. I like how it was just like the movie but in depth with Yvaine's feelings, you did a very good job.

This was brilliant! I love this pairing and this part of the film.

was a very good on-shot!

very good indeed!

i love it !

Beautiful, beautiful romantic story. I love Tristan and Yvaine from Stardust and I think you've done a wonderful job of bringing one of my favourite scenes to life. Continue writing!

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This is the first Stardust fanfic I've read and I liked it! It's very well written. :) Keep up the good work!

i loved it

aww...That was so sweet... I'm listening to the Stardust soundtrack while reading this.D

My favorite part in the movie! Waltzing always makes people fall in love. Haha. I know the goal was to write it like the book was written and I think you did that rather well. My favorite part was when it said that it was even a secret from her that she was happy for the contact. Because during the movie and the book you can tell there's something there but obviously neither of them realizes it. I thought it was very cute, very well written and a nice idea. Great job!