|Reviews for Seven Plus One|
| NumBaH-OnE 12/7/12 . chapter 1
| nejitenteji10sasu10 11/24/12 . chapter 1
That was suuuuuuch a nice reference to the seven deadly sins. Clever - I LOVED IT! :)
| Gamewizard2008 9/14/11 . chapter 1
| P.A 5/17/11 . chapter 1
i reviewed this befor, but this is so good. do you mind if i use this idea?
Angel of Pandemonium
| Angel of Pandemonium 5/12/11 . chapter 1
the card game in the middle threw me off for a bit... untill i got to the end. the story is one of the best that i have ever read. i congradulate you. Keep writing.
| Anony 4/17/11 . chapter 1
Omg! I knew it! The second sin made me think that all this looked all too familiar :))) then I realized what it was :))))) sooooooo cooolll! Best wowing fic yet!
| alicefrombakugan 3/26/11 . chapter 1
I'm loving this story... it's a little too 'teen' for my taste, but it's amazing. Good work...
| wolffie.lover 3/19/11 . chapter 1
what the heck is a nitpick?
| KeannaHughley1362 2/27/11 . chapter 1
Love the story!
| Mark of Distinction 2/20/11 . chapter 1
I didn't notice the Seven Deadly Sins theme until the very end. Looking back I totally see it. It starts with Wrath, then Gluttony, then Sloth, then Envy, Pride, a really overt Greed, and finally Lust. Which is why the adult didn't want to play the last card because it would work against him.
| Ulathon 2/14/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that was wonderful. Great way of putting the seven deadlies into play (And that was my Hoagie Gilligan moment of the day) They should use this story in Sunday school :-).
Were you influenced by the tradition of seeing all seven deadly sins as love in various perverted forms (as in pride is excessive love of self, gluttony love of worldly goods etc.)?
| x-WritingParadox-x 2/7/11 . chapter 1
I'm speechless, Phenon. The metaphor and the way you have woven it into the story. My, I'm far more impressed with your writing now. This was simply perfect. You have explored 1/362 to such an extent that it has made me content, but more intrigued in the couple's relationship. Perfectly amazing. I believe I will now stick to your writings(and a few other writers, of course) to become a better writer. Seriously, you're the ultimate role model in all writings. If you ever write a novel, I'd purchase it. You have a such an interesting view on the world. Good God, I love your writing.
Stay cool, Phenon.
| Isabella 1/30/11 . chapter 1
The childs point of view perfectly represents the disagreement between Nigel and Rachel. I loved it. So sweet!
| Walking like the Rain 1/30/11 . chapter 1
it was so good. but how does the card game resemble nigel and rachel at all? lol but it was a good twist. i never would have thought of it. love the way its written.
| Karg42 1/26/11 . chapter 1
It took me longer than I want to admit to realize that the Seven Cards were the Seven Deadly Sins. In hind sight, it seems amazingly obvious. A good story with an interesting portrayal of emotions. Hat's off to ya.