|Reviews for Dylan's dairy|
| stormtaker 11/1/12 . chapter 1
wow but sorta short ...
| themeduaproject 8/8/12 . chapter 1
This is really good! I totally thought it was Dylan1 Hey...what's Dylan's mum called?
| FMAForge 8/30/11 . chapter 1
This looks like a really good starting point!
You've summed up the Hunted really well.
As for improvement, try making the other chapters a bit longer, if you can.
And focus a bit more on how Dylan talks- the slang and everything.
So good luck!
| Cha-Cha-Cheesecake 1/29/11 . chapter 1
Holy canoly, another MP fanfic x333 YAAAY
Anyway. Onto the review.
This was interesting! :D But I'd prefer it if it were a bit longer, or has a few more chapters :)
You've pretty much captured Dylan's POV, but I personally think you should try and show Dylan's personality in your writing more. Like, whatever happened to her cocky talk and catchphrases, or even using "freakin'" in a sentence?
I love this though - Keep writing for the MP! :D
| Guest 1/28/11 . chapter 1
Wow! So good! I haven't read the books but it looks interesting! Please write more!
| Whatever-the-weather 1/27/11 . chapter 1
Great idea, love dylan, she is great, keep writing!