i think the smarter thing to do would be to have edward 'seduce' bree...the possibility of being queen would be an easy temptation, and if she is anything like tanya...like shooting fish in a barrel, lol

i want to have faith in him, i really do...but i dont...do his parents know anything about him being blackmailed? and if the blackmail is all of the sudden...how did the engagement even begin?

please learn your lesson bella, please, please, please! who needs friends like that, much less a 'boyfriend'

i am sorry...i disagree with bellas decision to basically become edwards mistress...i would have sent a letter...

His Royal Highness,
Prince Edward

it is without regret that i must unrespectfully decline your thoughtless offer of friendship.

i will make sure that i am only in your presense when required by my position here at the manor.

your servant,
(quite literally)
isabella m swan

then again, i am a total bitch to somebody who hurts my feelings soo...

omg! and everything falls apart at once...i am actually curious, in all of the drama that has gone on where have carlisle and esme been? or has edwards interactions with them been completely behind the scenes...i am wondering if they even know what is going on...and edward...wow, he really knows how to break a girls heart...jasper? is there any blame put on him for 'seducing' a maid? did he even fight for her? and what will roses reaction be?

I just finished reading your story. I really enjoyed it! I am on this Royalward kick lately and I'm glad that I stumbled on your story. I do have one question that I don't believe was ever answered but correct me if I'm wrong. I remember Edward would always frown when he saw Bella drinking. I always wondered why, and I don't remember if you ever addressed that. Thanks!

This is so fu... (sorry... having a Bella moment...) AMAZING! I'm in love with this story, and it's actually unfair since I didn't need to fight for what I love and all it needed was a simple click. This amazing story just lifted my mood after getting tortured at school. LOVED Bella's personality! Seriously! It's so much better than Twilight (no offense to Twilighters)! Awesome job with the story!

i dont know wheather to clap and be happy or be anxious...

Whoa!

i feel even more sorry for him now...tanya is beyond power hungry and she is going to be sooo much worse as the queen...

that is why he was so rude about the letters! i dont understand why he told tanya anything! i also think she should have left as soon as tanya confronted her...now she is in big trouble and i am guessing the king and her father will both have to be involved...

oh-no...she is going to humiliate herself at the ball...such a bad idea! i wonder if he got into trouble over the letters...

i was expecting some type of reply but not a letter back...maybe, i didnt know how exactly but a reply was necessary...also i expected a bigger pile of mess in regards to her comments, even though she was obivously just venting, such a direct comment, the whole 'i am going to...' like she is planning it? considered a direct threat...if she had said 'i wish somebody would...' not quite so bad...

no links... :( i wanted to see their 'trashed' outfits, lol...guessing edward doesnt have much of a choice as to who he is supposed to marry, i would be pissed to hear my future wife, if i was a dude...or chick i guess lol, said she wanted a bigger ring and was all about my title instead of at least pretending to be happy to be with me...

can she possibly not screw up in front of him? and how many hours do these poor people work?! what was in the drawer?!