I am so glad to have the chance to continue reading about Eden.

To read the destruction of Monteriggioni was even more heartbreaking than it was to play. And trust me, I hated that part of the game. I honestly liked Villa Auditore. And it gets me every time. That and Mario's death. Your descriptions of the war, well, I am just going to leave it at heartbreaking.

At the moment, I am siding with La Volpe with regards to Niccolo. That guy give me the creeps.

Why is Adel being so weird? And what about Eden's child? I know all will be answered, hopeful over another 40 or so chapters. I'm looking forward to getting to know Stef and Ghita a little better (Stef because he seems really cool. Ghita because I really hope she makes something of herself)

Hey!

Please update! This is one of the best fanfics EVER and I miss it *pouts* I'll send my own little brotherhood of assassins after you if you don't update soon!

Where are you? I miss your fanfic. D:

well sorry I haven't really reviewed but...anyways. The story is going good so far, actually I really like how smoothly you mix your ideas, everything is written in good style, it was nice touch intorducing the reqruits and Eden's sharp tongue, honestly, to me, never gets old. So yeah whenever you feel like it and have the inspiration, it wil be nice to see an update. :)

Can it be, I forgot to review? ;_;

Oh well.

Another nice chapter, and I'm very glad to see some recruits floating around! Stefano and Ghita both seem like good characters right now, I can't wait until they develop a bit more and more recruits start appearing. Will you be using canon recruits such as Tessa Varzi? I'd enjoy seeing her assassinate Malfatto... It'd be a wonderful irony. I probably seem rather enthusiastic with the whole Templar Agents VS Assassin Recruits battles, but hey... I love stuff like that! I'll admit I'm also hoping for a Lia de Russo VS Eden, but that's just me. Perhaps a Stefano VS Donato would be cool too... But I digress with my minor fanboy streak.

Anyway, definitely a well-written chapter. Can't wait until the action picks up more :D I admit, the moment I'm looking forward to the most is Eden's reaction to Juan Borgia...

It's been a while hasn't it? Awesome chapter, update ASAP! Vittoria agli Assassini! :):):):):):):):):):):):)

Everytime Eden and Machiavelli start to argue or nag at eachother, a voice in my head goes, "Bitch fight" and I can't help but laugh and keep reading. Great story, update soon!

please post another chapter :3

Long time no see, and another awesome chapter! Things are really heating up, poor Caterina! Inseime per la vittoria! Vittoria agli Assassini!

This chapter has fueled the fires of my new crackiest of crack OTPs I have ever had; Eden/Machiavelli... one sided of course, I'm not about to support cheaters. I don't know, the idea is just appealing to me, in some twisted way.

Eden and Nicolo banter ... it never gets old!

anyway ... greate to see you're back.

Heh heh heh."I'll give you a hug too if you'd like-" XD Great chapter! Please update more often! I miss this! Oh and I keep forgetting she's pregnant...:/

As always, Eden is hilarious! :)

Yay! She has her own office haha

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep up the epically fantastic work!

-BeachVamp ;p

Finally woman!

Looks like Eden and Machiavelli are having a hard time getting on with each other! Heck, everyone is!

A nice lengthy chapter which I love!

Keep it up and keep 'em coming please!

I really enjoyed this chapter :D I thought it went by a little fast chronologically, since I'm not sure if Ezio could have done all that he did in the amount of time Niccolo and Eden were talking. But maybe he could have, idk.

Also, why the hate on Niccolo from Caterina? In the game she seemed very respectful and treated him as an equal.

I was a little confused on why Niccolo stopped Eden from killing Cesare... But I guess it would have been a pyrrhic victory, since they would have lost both Niccolo and Eden for Cesare.

I'm kinda wondering why Niccolo is even sticking around at this point, too. It seems as though he's totally isolated within the order, and the only person he's even remotely friendly with is Ezio and has a frienemy in Eden.

La Volpe seems a little too suspicious, I think. It was definitely more subtle in the game, and for a master thief he's being kind of in-your-face about it.

Anyway, I thought this chapter was well thought-out and very well-written. I still love Eden as a character, and I like the way you portray most of the characters. I hope Adel gets a little more to do, since I don't think we've seen her in action? Oh well.