 Missyluv 12/14/11 . chapter 1Okay, that was hot. Seriously hot.
So first off, Basch and Ashe apparently have great sex when the weather is extreme. And secondly, our princess is a bit of an exhibitionist. Can't get any better than that!
You wrote this a year or so ago, I see. I wish you'd write more. They fics so good and this pairing so hard to find.
But what I really like, especially in this one, is that although they definitely want each other physically, you portray their tender emotions and love for each other really well. It's beautiful.
Oh, and you're really good at description! Made me feel like I was really there, which would, er, sort of be awkward if I was, but made for an exciting read.
Thanks again! |
 Ashbear 4/15/11 . chapter 1I'm so sorry it has taken me this long to review. I just wanted to drop by and say how much I've enjoyed the story. I personally loved Queen Ashelia's independent nature, which is very evident in the way you portrayed her. Plus, the way you built up the small details really did help set the subtle nuances of the scene.
And let’s face it, I got to say that I loved the excitement and danger of the public place. Vera, vera sexy. ;)
As always, you've done an amazing job with your work! I'm glad you're writing again. It's good to have you back in our little corner of the net. :p |