Pretty good story you got going here! I love Elena, and would love to see some more of this; you're a pretty solid writer! I did have to get over my pointed hate of first person- but you seem to have a good handle on it. Are there any pairings we should know? (Just saying, I love RufusxElena, seriously, checking out the fic Rebuilding by milvus, Its just awesome! ) Good work, and keep it up!