Write a sequel? Please? I would love you forever :)

O.o Ren dead! TT TT! Anyways good story! A bit short. but really good!!

- xImperfectlyX

Yay! Totally cute story!
*adds to Favorite Stories*
*glomps Ruaki* I luv ur stories, write more!

WAH~!! This story also makes ME cry every time I read it!! T_T T_T T_T Very touchin! Me likes, it describes everything very well! & bcuz it was right in the middle of the action, I thought it was better! I've seen the scans, but I didnt know what they said XP So ur dialogue helped ^^ I liked how u describe Ren being "an overproud peacock," or "inmortal god that's better than us puny humans!" XD Very good! I'm adding it to my favs, even tho, it's very sad!! T__T

Oh! So that's how Ren-Ren dies? Ouch! Yay for the manga! Poo the anime! XD

not bad. way to short - but not bad

ahh! so nicely written! you should do more episodes!! ^.^

Okay. I don't like yaoi stuff but this really caught my attention and to explain it in a non yaoi perspective like this story is -_-. It's really good! Of how you described it and stuff and I think it really catches from Horohoro's point of view of his respect for Ren and standing up for him and looking up to someone hoping one day to be a hero like him. I think this fanfic really captures that wonderful side of Horohoro and Chocolove. ^_^ but anyways. Write more! I can't wait!

cool!!! nice and romantic....

XD~ ren go bye bye~ seems like horo can't stand it too well at all~ great ficcy!!!!! wow!

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!~ Roo-sama, you are a god. You can write so beautifully. I love this! It makes me cry everytime I read it. I want Ren to look up and say 'Bakahoro...' and, like, kiss him, or something. *.* ::goes away to have yaoi-fantasies::

I said to you before and I say again, I could care less if you scripted the whole manga with the way you write. It's wonderful Ruu, *_*