 wingsofasparrow 4/2/11 . chapter 10THIS SUCKS ON ICE. NOT REALISTIC AT ALL. TOTALLY AU AND TERRIBLE! |
 oursong553 2/22/11 . chapter 10Two thumbs up |
 mara lena 2/8/11 . chapter 10a bit kitschy. but sometimes i need this and it felt right. :)
may fav line: "Walter yelled happily and ran over to Gene to tell her."
thanks for the story! and as I saw you've been busy writing new ones. looking forward to reading them! |
 mara lena 2/8/11 . chapter 9oh, killing the secretary is going to be a massive career killer! fauxlivia gets a human side here. peter on his way back, yay! |
 helikesitheymikey 2/7/11 . chapter 10wow...wonderful!
I'd LOVE to be a fly on the wall for Lincoln and Charlie's interrogation of Fauxlivia.
lovely story! you definitely had me crying duing a lot of the angst. |
 butterflies and mortals 2/7/11 . chapter 10Awww that was such a sweet ending :) i'm really going to miss this story. |
 Clmbls 2/7/11 . chapter 10What, the end? I don't want it to end! How about a fluffy epilogue or something? 0:) |
 zeusfluff 2/7/11 . chapter 10Seriously? This fic is done already? Wow, what a ride. I cannot wait to see what you come up with next!
Please come up with more fics soon!
Thanks,
ZeusFluff |
 noz4a2 2/7/11 . chapter 10...and together they made goodness...loved this story. What we do for those we love. To quote WOOz 'it's not how much u love, but how much u are loved by others'. Don't know if I got that verbatim or not, but u catch my drift. |
 helikesitheymikey 2/7/11 . chapter 9*perks up* we get Lincoln and Charlie! *squees happily*
so...FauxLivia gonna end up with Lincoln then? gotta admit Lincoln's adorkable and cute as heck.
LOVE IT!
course if Rachel meets FauxLivia she's probably gonna bitch-slap her.*grins*
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Clmbls 2/7/11 . chapter 9Ah! Take that, Walternate! (: |
 noz4a2 2/6/11 . chapter 9So, Peter is on his way home. I guess clicking his heels three times didn't work? Update soon. |
 noz4a2 2/5/11 . chapter 8Glad to see that Alt Liv isn't all bad. Hope things work out in the end. Thanks for the challange. You know who I am choosing. Update soon. |
 Sonia 2/4/11 . chapter 5 I kinda like this. But the only thing that annoys me a bit are some of the sentences and words that you use. 'I was enlightened to me'. They sound so posh. Which they dont on the show. So yeah.. I think its a bit out of character.. but the idea of the story is good. I just got this pet peeve about grammar and staying in character. But good job anyway. :) |
 Cerulean.Phoenix7 2/4/11 . chapter 7The ending broke my little shipper heart :(
Poor Peter and Olivia, that's all I can say, nothing ever seems to work out for them.
But... I have a hunch that our Liv will plan a daring rescue mission to get Peter back and kick Altivia's butt in the process.
Update soon! |