Haha I loved it!

It was really cute and very funny

Hmmm, an amusing tale. But, the word 'waste' in the context you have it in is spelt 'waist'

Holy heaven, you've got a talent for humor! This is great. Especially that little part about, "holy ruining the moment." Very cute. Well done.

Yours,

DZ

This story is a lot of fun, and especially the bit about "... isn't he?" - LOL. The additional characters were a nice surprise, and seemed in character besides. (Can I report an abuse of the English language, please? "To loose" something is to set it free. "To lose" something is the case where it has escaped of its own volition.)

hehehehehe. sounds like a very, very displeased little bat. i suppose robin had a pretty good last night of his life, though.