you live! ; i'm not too fond of fics where weiss seems strangely american, but i do like this one - i think the darker side of ken, the side that eventually comes to the fore dramatic precious, is hinted at quite well here, and his reflections on his teammates and their weapons is a nice touch, too.

All I can say for these is...wow. Simply amazing. I truly enjoy reading your fics. You give a nice look into what the chars are thinking. Very nice.

Skyler *Keeper of Ran's Katana and Ken's Bugnuks*

ooh. i especially like the idea that kritiker gave them weapons that'd allow them to feel the deaths of their victims. a nicely-done fic, not overly-pessimistic. write more? _;; i'd love to see your takes on ken and aya.

wow. a chilling look inside omi's mind. though i'm more of the opinion that omi honestly believes that he's doing right ( well, mostly ) this character study was done brilliantly.

Assassin. Murderer . Killer. Brave . Strong . Man of Honor.

That is what Omi is.

Liked your fic, went deep into his head , and the scars idea was of sorrow, but still, we senced the air of bravery here.

Beautifully written.

Beautiful...you wrote the angst and morality thing with a perfect sense of reality, but no unecessary guilt. It's really great!

This is great. It's a take on Omi I haven't read before and I adore it. He's more human and less nieve(Gods I can't spell) this way. Good job.

Very nicely done. Well written, and you managed to make Omi have morals without making him into a trite idealistic superman figure. I liked it very much indeed...

Damn that was cool. I'm not used to (well-written) Weiß fics where anyone comes out looking like a hero, or even where there's any clearly defined good and evil. (That's one of my favorite things about this series.) Your fic, however, was a beautiful look at how things could be if any of them still held any ideals. I enjoyed it very much, and it definitely stands out on ff.n, where so many fics suck.

Amazing, this one is definitly going in my favs!