oh my :3 such cuties they can be thanks for your work. :D

Show me the pictures!
Me gusta mucho!

Aw, cute. Thank you! w

Aww Yeahh, Aww Yeahh, Aww Yeahh, AWWWWW... YEAHHHH!

That was awesome! Loved it

Good story. Which picture? It's hard for me to find good Altair Malik pictures.

Gahh! I remember sending this fic to my email to read it over again. I love it. Keep writing

It was pretty adorable. 3

A few grammar errors here and there; you might want to look it over again. Almost every spoken part, if not every one had the "..." for effect, which is fine, but given the characters, perhaps a few strong, stately pieces of dialogue would have made it just that much better. When you don't use the "...", you are missing punctuation altogether. This should not be the case.

*Self proclaimed* Grammar Nazi strikes again! Seriously, though, it's only to help you. Other than that your words are colorful and detailed. It's a pretty sexy story. Keep writing. 3

psycho neko-chan

*giggles like an obsesed fangirl* OMG! THAT WAS AWESOME!

I liked this. It was cute. :) The story was nice, I always imagined Malik as the kind of person to have wetdreams about Altair xD (then again, who hasn't?)

Oh, what lemony goodness w I wasn't expecting such a turnabout from Malik. Usually, it's the other way around. Good work; keep writing x3

Awwwww! Hot AND cute!

:D

Thomas

OMG THIS WAS JUST AWESOME!

I LOVED EVERY PART OF IT 33

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Loool, aaaaww, that was really cute, and hot xD. Nice job, )