I really like it! Funny, easily read and very well understood.

Nice!

That was great. I could see a really cute story coming from that.

my favourite bit is "because that can't be healthy"... no, adorable little Edward, not for you or for her! lol!

I love that you had the courage/ I was annoying enough to make you post this.

I really liked this one. I can feel the emotion, almost even experience it. Nicely done!

Annie

Not my favorite. Still "hazy", I can't quite focus on the heart of the matter.

Don't get me wrong, it is still good, just not the best... yet. :)

Annie

So bittersweet. I can only say this because I know that feeling all too well. My baby turns 15 on Valentine's day. *sniff sniff* It was only yesterday that he was born, I swear it!

Until next time (which will be more than a week), I am "leaving on a jet plane". Off to warmth, sun and the sea I go!

Annie

this one is lovely. really lovely. like you.

now I am sucking up. right. constructive comments.

it's sweet and happy and sad and aching and really lovely.

I said that already, didn't I?

That's so sweet.

naughty... I like it! ;)

te he he. I LOVE this one! great use of the prompt. awesome job!

clever. nice twist on canon. :)

now, this one I see very clearly. mainly because my imagination creates extraordinarily vivid pictures when it comes to Rob's hands/ thumbs/ fingers, etc. I wonder why. hmm.

horny CanonWard WIN.

(that is all)

not my favourite either. I think it's because I can't imagine the setting as much as with some of the others. but I still *gigglesnort* at blue balls. nice interpretation of the prompt!

in my head, Jake/Bella/Edward goes a little differently. twice as many dicks, three times the fun! sorry. gross but true.

awesome job! :D