Aww. This was a very neat story. Loved the lesson learned and the lovely banter between Master and Apprentice.

oh wow! What a great master/padawan training moment :) I loved it!

Great job! Keep it up!

Mireille '.'

VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD!

Cool dude! Where did you get this idea at? I think it's an interersting one. Do you have any more stories. If not, that's okay. I still like this one. It's cool.

Just a lonely ol' ghost who really *really* likes your stuff! This is fabulous and rings true to the movies and the JA books. Keep up the great work!

I don't mean to swear but DAMN that was a good story and well written too.

greatly written.. lots of action. i like the lessons qui-gon teaches obi-wan.

Nice story, very well written!

applause You have yourself quite a talent. I liked all the emotion and character

Nicely written, but I'm not sure about the public nature of the testing... didn't seem Qui-Gon-ish, I guess.

Excellent! Writing a battle scene is not an easy thing to do. And this one was written so vividly, I could literally "see" every blow. Well done! I look forward to many more stories such as this one!

I loved it! A wonderful look at two Jedi that I dearly love!

Good Charecterazation!

Very nicely written story, very vivid in imagery. Good job.

Way COOL!

I loved reading your story. Keep On WRITING more of them ok. I'll keep reading them.