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countingthestars12 4/11/11 . chapter 1
This story was so, so cute! I love the idea of Ella as Connect Three's stylist, and I think your plot was very creative and adorable. I loved the anticipation you built for the moment when Nate and Ella realize and accept each other's feelings and kiss (i.e. her hiding the fact that she hasn't slept from him and hiding the fact that he's the boy she's been thinking about, his small but noticeable moments of jealousy of this 'other boy,' the fact that it was he who pulled back the curtain and discovered she was still awake, instead of Shane or Jason, etc.). Great fic, I really enjoyed it! :D
spwarkle 2/26/11 . chapter 1
lol I loved the line at the end! 'That was epic!' hah that made it seem so realistic! I loved it!
Ang922 1/26/11 . chapter 1
Wow! The oneshot was epic! :P
Standard-Ang3l 1/26/11 . chapter 1
. lol. so cute.

And I empathize with Ella. I hate when I can't sleep.
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