Yes, I liked it. It does set the stage and effectively explain the hostile relations between the Count and Alain. The film portrays the Count as a lovable old geezer, but as you say, the original was far more forbidding. Well done!

I liked that a LOT! Much more satisfactory than the way the movie went. Can't wait for you to write some more!

Very good story so far. I am horribly curious to see what happens next! What is going to happen to Alain? Can Susan honestly resist such a lovely invalid? Methinks it is doubtful! ;-D

Love,

Mimi