Please finish this. There aren't enough Stanton/Vanessa stories!

it was good. but i don't think that you should do the whole story in bold/itallics. also you should edit it before you upload it. cause there were a lot of run-un sentences and stuff that didn't make any sense. there were words missing and no periods. other than that it was really good. i love the story idea, but you should look this over again and reupload it.

Upload soon!

i suck at this because it doesn't keep words i write up!