Once again- Wow. This is amazing and brilliant and sums up the entire character. The language is so amazing.

And once again- Why is the disclaimer and author's note on seperate pages? The fic really could be deleted because of the first chapter.

But this is such a wonderful poem! It's deep and you use beautiful metaphors to describe everything. I'll be sure to check out your lists on how to annoy Snape and Voldemort!

Wow! Great character study! The style reminds me of the Raven by Poe. You're on my favorites list now. I especially liked the "What looms in mind and dire musing" section. The last stanza is great too.

i love this, i read your lupin one and i like it better than this one but i think this one is a bit to complicated or to..sad for me to understand at the moment you know to be in the right mood anyways my fav. verse was

He meets, with glares to warn designed

What kindly glances pass his way

Their faces only bring to mind

Those of friends he once betrayed

its the one thats most like me in a way, i hope you write more poems, their both really brilliant i wish i could write like that, bye!

Very good rhythmn, and very descriptive, you feel Snapes sorrow, guilt and anger in this poem very well, not many writers can do that :)

*Stares in silent awe* Wow. *thinks she should put something else* Wow.

I normally don't read the poetry, but since it dealt with my favorite Potions Master, I decided to give it a shot. And I rarely review, especially poetry, but this was super. Your name should be right up there with such wonderful authors as Severitus and Silverfox.

Kitty -.-

O_O WOW...that's REALLY GOOD...

I loved this poem! You've really captured him, well, my perception of him anyway. I like your use of language too, you're obviously very literate. What a refreshing change!;)

You have talent. Really good talent.

Haunting, emotionate. Truly wonderful.

Athalia enjoyed this poem.

Great poem, it summed up 'Our Dear Snape' perfectly! :o)

Oh, go see my review on Lunar Eclipse. the exact same thing applies! GREAT FIC!

TGKTG

Wow...I'm quite impressed. Your style is reminiscent of Poe - The Raven kept creeping into my mind while I read this lovely poem.

Amazing work :)

-Dahl

Not bad...

Can you please tell me through a review(read Crazy Quest)how should I add in Favourite Authors and Favourite stories.

I hereby dub myself your boot-kisser.

One word came to mind when I finished reading this.

*warning, those against slight cursing may want to skip to the PG version*

Hot damn, this is good!

*PG*

Hot dang, this is good!

Again, the last line leaves a powerful impact, and lines were simply amazing! GREAT job, and make sure to keep cranking out these awesome poems!

Peace, Love, and Moony,

MG*

PS- I AM a Lupin Lover! However DID you guess? *laughs*

Peace, Love, and Moony!

MG*

This is absolutely gorgeous! You have captured here what I have not been able to in my fics and writing. Most of which has not made it to fanfiction for very good reasons *looks around sheepishly* I am now very inspired to rewrite some of a fic I'm starting. I hope you don't mind if I mention your poem in it. Thank you for sharing this. :)