|Reviews for The Mouse of Konoha|
| Dyani91 5/6/13 . chapter 21
awesome i totally adore this it's hilarious very creative please keep up the good work
| tiffycoop 5/1/13 . chapter 1
We have the very beginning of Naruto’s ninja career. And at its beginning he learns a very valuable lesson: nothing is free. This is a lesson everyone learns at some point in their life but Naruto is learning sooner than most. More importantly, he seems to understand what it means. (Hey if you want to make sure he learns something, figure out how to incorporate ramen in your explanation. If you can, I would bet you would have Naruto’s undivided attention.) As he grows as a person and a ninja, this lesson will be engrained in his psyche. As he progresses in his career, he will not be an easy person to manipulate. People will assume since he’s an orphan he would be more susceptible for manipulation and they would be wrong. (Sorry Danzo.)
I am also enjoying the fact that Naruto is using his mind. In canon he is too gullible but here I have hope he will use his brain more often. The fact that he’s starting to think this early makes me hopefully he will learn how to make plans. In canon, the only things he would plan was his pranks! With your story I have a feeling he will plan more than just his pranks. All ninja should shudder at that thought.
Looking forward to reading how this will all play out. I have a feeling it will definitely be interesting.
| LuxEterna1 4/26/13 . chapter 10
nice though two things
first of its kitsune (foxes) or yoko (demonfoxes) that are natural shapeshifters not kyuubi (ninetails)
second majong is always player with four players no more no less (so no all clanheads playing togeher)
and btw you sure can to an extend count and deduce the tiles the other players have at majong
| LordOwl 4/24/13 . chapter 21
I have greatly enjoyed your story so far. Your characterization and unique development of Naruto by emphasizing certain traits and applying his endearing approach to people is an inspiration. Hope you continue updating this chapter.
| KaitouHime-NightsWing 4/24/13 . chapter 21
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what is Mouse thinking this time? Why does he want to get into the Bank? I really can't wait to find out! XD
| Lord Wrath 4/23/13 . chapter 1
| Malichite 4/22/13 . chapter 21
Totally epic story. I gotta say I absolutely love this piece of work here. This story is one of only a few that are in my epic list, or my top 5 stories of all time. I love the descriptions you give, as you don't go too far too often, as some authors who get hung up on descriptions tend to do at times. Overall it feels like this story has a perfect amount of descriptive context, and the detail you go into things like the last chapters tea ceremony really give credence and life to an event that many people simply gloss over, typically because they don't know all the intricacies that are apart of such a ceremony.
I hope everything goes well for you in your remote location, and I know many people, myself included, can't wait to read more. Here's hoping we get to read something when you get back.
Good luck and safe travels!
| Yautja's Blooded Pet 4/21/13 . chapter 1
Congrats. You're officially my new god.
I read this over the course of five days on my phone at work. From the beginning to chapter 21, you have re-written my view of Naruto and the untold story within Kishimoto's series.
...I had a million statements to write here about how much I admire your creativity and how I've fallen in love with TMOK... but now that I'm here with my hands on the keyboard, I'm speechless.
I'll be scouring your profile to see if there are any other goodies I can get my hands on. You've upped the anti for my standard concerning fanfiction. Other authors will now have a harder time stepping into the badass zone, which now has a plaque with your name on it inside.
| bugzadc 4/21/13 . chapter 21
the author's note on the last chapter has me going "noooooooooo!"
| michaelwillmc1 4/20/13 . chapter 21
Hey dreamer love the fic, can't wait to see some more ... hope to see some soon
| Joni85 4/19/13 . chapter 21
Ack I had in my head that you were getting back the beginning of spring, not the end /going through withdrawals. Next time your work decides to send you off to the middle of nowhereland I will personally buy you a notebook and pencil to take with you p
| Tama Saga 4/14/13 . chapter 19
That's right...in the previous chapter you had Ino claiming Naruto as the best imouto that she's never had. Imouto is "little sister". I believe the word you're looking for is ototo, otherwise Naruto would be more offended.
| Nixieneo 4/14/13 . chapter 7
The decision to give Naruto a solid grounding in ninja humour is NOTHING SHORT OF GENIUS. Excellent work!
| sparklybutterfly42 4/4/13 . chapter 21
I absolutely adore this story! It's just too good! Naruto is so funny and I love his elaborate pranks. please update soon!
| Kyubii's Shinigami 4/4/13 . chapter 21
damn this story is awesome made me laugh soooo much! keep up the good work and hope you come back and update soon cause i cant wait for the next chapter XD