Wow! Lovin your story. Great job.

Nice story and I always like a happy ending. :)

This was great! Thanks for sharing!

I was very very impressed with your story, the flow, the wording, the texture of it was marvelous, it really felt like an extension of Farscape. You did a remarkable job of writing Aeryn Sun, she is a tricking one to pin down but you did a wonderful job.

I hope to read more of your stuff in future.

Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your story.

I loved this so much I didn't want it to end. White was served up with messing with the Chricthons. Flyte was not as bad as she seemed. I'm glas she sided with the right people. Of course we know John is alway the hurt one. Aeryns people completed their job well in rescuing Livvy and Flyte's move in not drugging Aeryn and John, I think saved their lives essentially. Earth had a lot of explaining to do and know what's coming, next time they encounter space aliens, such as Aeryn and John. hehehe Anywho, all is well in space. Deke and Livvy get to have a slight vacation on earth. John and Aeryn are back in each others arms and possibly a new one on the way. Isn't space wonderful. hehehe :D

Just wanted to sayh that this story is great one of the best that I have read and can not waint until you do another thanks

The only thing that makes me sad about this story is that it has come to an end. That said, I can imagine there is plenty of room for further development if desired.

The best part of the story is how the author captures the evolving relationship between Aeryn and John in a way that is both true to their original characters, but also is believable as to how years would bring them closer.

You really have grown as a writer, Richard. I was riveted by the emotions and balancing act you had to do between Moya, the Sebeceans, J/A, the kids, and the bad guys. All of the voices were perfect without abandoning the inner life of the characters. They were three-dimensional, including the kids.

Bravo. I'm sorry the story is ended. Cute ending, though.

If I didn't know better, I would think your trying to kill us with suspense. heheheh. I'm going for two. Since Aeryn and John have found Flyte, there rescue attempt went as usual, Farbot. Anywho, now they are being experimented on as well as being in dire danger for their lives. I hope their kids find out and then all holy heck breaks out. My hope is that Flyte may be a unknown ally for all the Chricton family. Now that Sikozu, Novak and Nybar have made it clear to earth they will attack if any harm comes to Johns' family. Earth better beware. Earth just started a war that they can't finish, and they know John and Aeryn are captured. They made a bad decision firing on Sikozu and the Chricton crew. Let's just hope they have not done too much damage to John and Aeryn. :D I hate you and your end drama. Well in a nice way. hehehe Hurry up with the next chapter, will ya. :D

Richard, this just rocks. Love the feeling of claustrophobia and yet Aeryn and John are seriously dangerous despite John's emotions. The kids are real and the situation dangerous. Great story.

I love that this is a typical adventure for John and Aeryn. With the help of John's sister,looks like they will be able to get around a little more. But now the govt is playing a little dirty. John and Aeryn know this game well at being bated to get back their kids, as well as the govt trying to capture them both. At least the this Dr. Flyte is trying to keep Deke andhis sister from being experiments and possibly never recover. John and Aeryn are running a race to save their kids. But the up side is that they may have some unexpected help from the locals. :D

I'm growing curious about John's lack of aging and the reference that his father hasn't aged normally either. I had to smile when Livvy asked for all the details of John and Aeryn's last visit.

Livvy proves to be just as intelligent as her brother. I hope this Dr. Flyte will not do anything to harm either children. John already knows that Aeryn is sensitive to this heat and seeing if his father still resides at his old house might have been a big mistake. I going to the next chap to see what happens. hehehe :D

Whoo Hoo! A LONG story by the scientist. :) I can't wait to read more. Here we go. :)