OMG that's from guys and dolls junior! the exact version Im in! any way great job!

I LOVE IT!

My mom and grandmother used to sing that song to me when I was little. Imagine my surprise when I heard it sung in Guys and Dolls!

This is pretty good overall. At one point you said "how hate" instead of "hate how"; it's noticeable because HATE is capitalized and bold. If it's still Adelaide speaking, then these lines should be the same paragraph: "Perhaps, we'll see how things go." "How should I handle this?"

Teeheeeee that was sweet! :) only sawtgis play once but I love Adelaide and Nathan as a couple they are so cute! New obsession? I think yes.

Awww this is adorable, please continue. I haven't seen the play, only snippets of the movie (of which I just found out today they'd actually made a movie) but you've written the characters so well- beautiful! Please update soon! Onto my faves and alerts list!

How adorable! I love the little "Achoo!"

Very romantic... I'm a sucker for romance between musical theatre characters.