This is getting awfully intriguing and complicated. Please continue soon!

I love Candy's voice in the story, and you've got the teenaged Jonathan down pat, I think! But that Callahan... argh...!

Loved the Captain giving him what he deserves on the deck as well ;-)

I have loved the Captain and this show since I was a girl. And now I get to read more about the love story between Daniel and Carolyn. Please keep going. I read all 8 chapters while sitting at work. I need more.

Well, I was pleasantly surprised to see a chapter written. I'd figured this was one story I'd not see continued. Nice to see Martha getting everything out in the open.

I had read this some time ago- and was regretted we never found out what happened next! Looking forward to more!

Oh, just what we always wished for - nicely done taking an attack and turning it into "they did"

Glad to see this moving forward my friend!

Gayle

OK! That was a great story. I really hope that you are going to continue writing it bc I hoping to read more of this story. :)

Well, you've got me hooked! I certainly hope that you'll be updating this intriguing story very soon!

interesting chapter.

Don't know if you ever saw the kids cartoon "Pinky and the Brain" - but if you did, you'll understand when all I can hear in my head is Brain going "YES!" Oh lovely twist following twist, can't wait for the next chapter!

great chapter.

Have I seen the light? Do I know where this is leading? Do I have second sight?...:D ...well 2 out of three ain't bad, and even with those two, I'm not really sure yet! :D

The hints are there but I don't want to pull out examples, in case I'm totally wrong or give the game away...it's that, or I'm reading this all totally up-side down...great suspense...:) Thank you :)

AH HA she said with a glimmer of insight (finally!) what a lovely turn of story - beautifully written as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Gayle

Loved the fish rots from the head! Where do you find these things? Very clever! I have to say reading this story Chapter by Chapter and having just finished Chapter 4 I have to say this story took a completely different turn then what I had anticipated after Chapter 1. You had me hooked on "we were mesmerized" and I drew an obvious conclusion. But that's me, little imagination which is probably why I can't write! I am very intrigued as to what direction you will take us next!

Each chapter gets more and more intriguing, like a mystery that is slowly unveiled, leaving the reader at the end, filled with potential hints and possible scenarios, breathless...! :)

Anticipation IS a fine wine but (Oh good grief) I'm getting light headed just waiting for what is in store...Wonderful work! Thank you:)

New Chapter! Sqeee!...DG faces Callahan with "calm indifference"? WHAT!...Noooo...No evidence of "good old fashioned temper squalls"? *faints* ...What is really intriguing is his apparent calmness to this Irish Invasion, so soon after his argument with CM...sooo looking forward to you continuing this...thank you...:)