I though W.W. pulled out a gun. Cus u ended with " BANG!". this was too cute. And a little sad. But it ended well. I like Carlos ending up with Logan. Even tho I ship JARLOS. Jarlos rules! But this was nice. But its time to go find a james/carlos fic. Good day.

I love it!I wanted Kendall,Logan,and James to beat his ass for punching Carlos,but I guess a make-out session will do,lol.

This is pretty good! keep up the good work! :) Carlos can't leave. if he does I may cry.

Haha

There is so much drama packed into this-I loved it-haha I would deff company this 2 a soap opra-but that's just me saying greet job

I like the idea of this story... Well, all except for the WayneWayne/Carlos parts, no offense. What exactly was Carlos saying when he was speaking Spanish?

Your best is very good. This story is great, and I like the Wayne-Wayne/Carlos pairing. Can't wait to see where this goes

Haha

Greetjob

I reallyloved how used a different pairing at the start and Kline how Wayne-Wayne isn't a bad guy athirst in this

Greet job !

Ithink itwas reallywell written andi loved the entire plot

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