I know this was written a long time ago, but wheeee! I like it :D it's so sweet and fluffy!

You really write Tony and Ziva flawlessly. I was smiling the whole time I was reading! Please add a few more chapters... I really want to see how this plays out. :)

Love it! It made sense, it seemed reaslistic, and the writing was great. Amazing job!

I laughed all the way through this!I love the Grinch heart chicken bone was so funny!I could just see Tony's greasy face looking at her Was cute!

Another very nice piece by you with good humor. I loved the click click click and Tony saying stop turning me on! As always you are so true to the characters.

that was so funny! the clickclicklick LMAO

your words flowed luxuriously and the story was captivating. it seemed straight from the show, like it happened one night while working a case. great job!

I love the mood of this. Feels very much in sync with the Tony and Ziva we see on the show, with the situations coming up and going and making them hesitate and maybe wonder for a second and then saying, oh well, and moving on.

I'd actually love it if you'd continue on this one, just because I'd be really, really interested to see you keep up that mood and how you'd turn it into them not moving on.

Oh I love the little slips of the tongue... thought not when it happens to me. Haha. Nicely written piece as always. XD

Cute! I liked it a looooot! Feel free to continue!

I loved the idea for this - it was very funny and very Tony/Ziva-ish.

But, I do feel that I should inform your characters, as someone who has completed my responsible service of alcohol certificate, that they should not be drinking alcohol as a pick-me-up because it's a depressant, and they should certainly not be driving so soon after consuming half a bottle of red wine and a large amount of fatty food (which makes the alcohol move more slowly through your body) :)

Anyway, great job!

What a great story! :) haha it's so typical Tony and Ziva, definitely something I can see happening on the show.

I love drunk Tony haha that is exactly how I would imagine him drunk :P

really good, you definitely made me smile :) I'm not sure if it needs to be continued but I shall subscribe just in case. :) x

haha thats funny!

very amusing story. it made me laugh alot!

even though you dont want to, i think you should continue this

keep writing

anna-grace

I think that this works awesomely as a character driven piece and does not need to be continued. Part of its strength is its brevity. These are the quiet moments we assume exist, but don't get to see on the show I liked this a lot.

I love it!