That is a stunning piece of literature. Excellant. I hope to read more of your work soon. I myself am posting my first fic "Secrets and Longings" but don't think I can do half as good as you.
Goodness, how sad! I wonder how he would commit suicid. No, I am not a suicidle person, just really into death. It facinates me. Sorta like Poe. Ok, I'll save the rest for my Deadjournal. Anywho, great stuff! Keep it up!