Vry gd. I Luvd how u integrated th lines of th guards of swamp castle wit th French n ths last one. N how Th Killer Rabbit got 2 The Cave (cant spell th name :( ) N how th Ni knight discovered th sacred word "Ni, pang, n Niwom" :) cldnt resist.

Love it! I cant wait for more!

I really would like to see Prince Herberts back story, if youre willing.

Very good! Maybe you can write more? Haha I love the penname.