So...more "Rule 63"? There should be.
Please. }

UPDATE, I BEG YOU

I usually don't like femslash, but I find this really good, for some reason... so, good job! Update.

"But you'd feel a spider crawl into your mouth. And why would a spider crawl into a mouth? That's not an M.O. that a spider would have, Mav, to get into someone's mouth. And if they got in there they're not going to continue into the esophagus and then walk their dumb ass right into a boiling pit of acid, right?"

leoandsnake, you are too funny. this is the second time I've seriously cracked up this chapter! :D

as usual, this is great and I look forward to more.

I wasn't actually to sure I wanted to read this story when I first read the summary because I just thought what on earth however I was glad I did. You actually wrote this really well and I really hope you update it soon. You caught Viper's character really well and I liked the "demon seed" comment. Please update this soon I want to see how you carry on with it.