great story

Oh, I like it. I've been reading some of your west wing stuff and I very much enjoy it. I've always been a fan of Josh and Donna finally admitting their feelings. Good job.

I really like this one because of it's stream of concious feel to it. It's instinctive feel to it. It's natural rhtymn. Wonderful.

WOW! That was good! I have honestly never posted a review before, but I must say, that was awesome! I read it aloud and WOW! You rock! The 'tick tocks' really add to the feeling of the piece, and the runon-esque 'and' sentencing give it a wonderful breathless feeling. Wow. I loved it! hc