would like to see this contiued but with Jack being pulled in despite saying he wouldn't be

Nice start. Liked the character voices. Been a long time, so I am guessing you won't continue, but it was a good place to end anyway.
Thanks for sharing.
Maia.

I would love to see this story be completed as it looka awesome.

Oooh, I like it! Please continue :)

Love this, Eliot being respectful to a superior officer, Jack with his usual 'I get what I want' attitude, a hint of back story with the singing. Hopefully it will be continued real soon.

Looks pretty good so far. I would like to see more later.

Oh! Oh! This is so cool! I'm intrigued. Terrific beginning to this crossover. I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing, so far.

MavenAlysse

like it so far. ppms

Ooh, ooh, I can't wait for the next installment!

You got me interested in more, so please, continue.

I always like it when Eliot get's visitors from his earlier days.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

good work, flesh it out some and continue with it.