I've always loved to see Puck jealous when Rachel has another boyfriend. This paragraph was adorable and funny in Puck's own special style:

"Maybe it's a stupid reason to hate him, but that's it. That's the only reason. No, it's not because maybe Rachel should be directing that crazy ass grin of hers at him and not Kyle. It's not because he and Rachel have better chemistry, or that whenever she tells him he's not a Lima Loser or that he'll make something of himself his stomach legit does back flips. It's not because sometimes she takes his hand when they sing on stage, for no reason except to hold it, and he feels like that stupid little boy that just realized girls don't have cooties and they smell nice. It's not 'coz whenever she comes over, his ma grins at him like he's finally doing something right in life, or when he drives her home she sings and dances in the seat next to him and it's fuckin' cute. It's just 'coz Kyle smiles like some pedo at a kid's park. That's it."

Hahaha, the last line was even funnier because even if pedo is the short for "pedophile", it means "fart" in Spanish too, so saying that Kyle is a fart is a very amusing insult.

You did a wonderful job with Artie's and Brittany's (As far as I know that's how her name's spelled) dialogue, it was very in-character, and it was so cute that Rachel actually figured out how what was the meaning of the metaphor when Puck said she was his lobster.

lmmfao i like to ahve choked on ma pizza while i was reading this.. lamo loved it

mel

This was really cute. I loved it!

Awww... Noah quoting Brit in the end was great.

This is so Puck. His voice is incredibly strong in this story, not just because it's in his point of view. You did a great job writing in such a way that his voice was distinct from any other character's (even though the other characters were dialogue-only).

The lobster thing makes me laugh - as does Rachel's reaction to being called one! That made me crack up. I always enjoyed it when people would refer to animals to make their points about relationships, and this was one of the funniest and sweetest ones I've heard about.

Great job!

FREE THE LOBSTERS!

I Literaly LOL'd when puck was think that he hoped she knew one lobster theory or it'd be really weird.

This story makes me think that Brittany should meet Phoebe from Friends. I think they'd really get along, especially considering that the quote about lobster couples is from her. Lol. Great story. I really love Brittany. She says the most marvelous things. )

This was absolutely adorable. And Im pretty sure you watched Friends right before you wrote this. Classic Phebe and her weirdness. But you gotta love her.

Oh, the Friends references! Classic episode.

I love how Rachel is so happy to be his lobster. What a strange reaction.

Brittney is the best. I would love to see her and Puck comment crimes together.

Great fic!

You write Brittney so so so so well. I'm a huge Brittney stickler and if she's in a story and its not right I click out.

I don't think I will ever click out of one of your stories. Do you live in these character's heads? Because every word, every thought is so dead on and just PERFECTION.

Thank you so much for the entertaining reads.

LOL! This was absolutely adorable and such a sweet fic about Puckleberry with Artie and Brittany in the mix! Thanks!

hehehe...cute!

Oh my goodness, this was absolutely adorable. I loved how you captured each character perfectly. "She's your lobster!" Genius!

I always love when Brittany gets profound! Too funny!