nice

Robin and Kaldur friendship, I haven't seen a lot of that.
Good job, I like it.

oh my gosh, is amazing your history, i love can you continue this, 'cause is very nice like a soaop opera
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Very cute.
I love Kaldur and Robin moments, so sweet.

The ending would probably have been better without the last paragraph

But the story was nice nonetheless

I liked it

I think Kaldur and Robin have a very special relationship

XD again

D X AWWWWWWWWW! I luved it tho.

This was great I loved it and all the quotes!

I loved your ending!

Flames are not minded? Hmm, okay *passes ball of flames* Have a nice day! Love ya!

-Abby T. La Rue

Aww, that's so sweet. Very wonderful job on this fanfic!

I'm happy to see some Kaldur and Robin interaction. :)

i really enjoyed this one shot. its nice seeing kaldur and dick connect without the story being full of slash.

Very good. This is very well written and awesome.

I like how you have Aqualad and Robin. They are both in character and they have a nice dialogue. Simple and clear. I also like how you have bits of humor in some places and then it goes to an emotional depth. I really Robin's mother did influence his attitude with girls.

Although I didn't understand what you meant when Kaldur says 'I'm a little...' sentence. Did he mean how could he remember what his mom said back then?

Keep writing good fics!

Well first off this story is awesome. I love how you hinted to Robin's past without telling it straight out, and the rest of the conversation between these two is well done. Also the way you have characterized them is good. I love how you presented Robin's mother's influence on his attitude towards girls.

For the ending, I like how Robin "stood up abruptly" because it seems like a reaction most people would have to not appear troubled and allow them to wonder off and have some time alone.

So I noticed you think the ending is a little weird. maybe you could add a sentence that Kaldur doubts that Robin is tired and concludes he needs space before the sentence, "Kaldur stood as well..." For the last sentence maybe you could write, "and the conversation that night would only be heard by the eternal stars in the sky." or "before either reached their destination both looked at the stars in the midnight sky." maybe that help you figure out how to fix it. Just so you know even though I wrote ways that you could change the story, I love it because it is wonderfully written.

So really this story is amazing, and I hope you write more stories.

Hi

Nice little short. It didn’t seem slash, but I can understand why you would put a note assuring the reader that it wasn’t.

The quality is very good, good narration, dialog, interaction, emotion, drama and humor.

The story with Dick/Robin and Kaldur /Aqualad at the beach, having a heart to heart talk, about themselves and Robin’s past wad dynamic.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

And the reference to hormones being your worse teacher, and how its important to teach a girl with respect and not to lead her as if she is yours to do whatever you please, was fantastic. Generally, entertainment has an undertone message: if you choose, that’s OK, its normal. Glad your not like that.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker